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11/5/20, 7:32 PM
Greg Sanders, like, from CSI?
Mesmerdude
11/5/20, 7:21 PM
This was really good, extremely hot concept, fun execution, although feels it cut off right as it was building up. Would absolutely love to read more!
Reb
11/5/20, 6:36 PM
Great story, good detail, hot subject, very well written. Read it all in one go, edging all the time. Look forward to more. (The author is also hot!)
11/5/20, 4:04 PM
Wow. This chapter was fantastic! Thank you for the content warning, too--it was not just a good way to steel myself against it, but a reminder of the kind of events in these stories and how scary they can be. It looks like my mystery answer was wrong, though...although I see another "And Then There Were None" parallel. "One choked his little self and then there were nine ('Gagged,' oral sex); one overslept himself and then there were eight ('Slumbered,' fell asleep and got transformed)." If we're going in order, then we have: "One got left behind," "One chopped himself in halves," "A bumblebee stung one," "One got in Chancery," "A red herring swallowed one," "A big bear hugged one," "One got all frizzled up," "He went and hanged himself..." I wonder how the transformations will happen! You're an amazing author. :)
11/5/20, 3:28 PM
Otra historia en español!!!!! ahhhhh!!!! >.< sigue escribiendo, me encanta ver mas autores en español :3 solo te diria como consejo que le des otra revisada al texto, habia algunls errores de dedo en varias partes, pero en general todo muy bien ^ ^ me dejaste con la.idea de q iria contra el dueño XD pero supongo q tiene sentido que primero vaya por lo quebesta a su alcance 😅 ya quiero leer mas y ver si el efecto fue permanente o no... o como reaccionara si el efecto se va... digo creo q nunca le dijo que estuviera desacuerdo o que lw gustara lo que ocurrio entre ellos XD esperare ansiosamente la.siguiente parte :3
Anonymous
11/5/20, 1:36 PM
Your writing style is absolutely incredible. You create such amazing visuals with your words!
11/5/20, 11:35 AM
The story is okay, but it isn't in the 2nd person - it's in the first person to begin with ['I'] and then switches to the third person ['he, she. it']. Second person is 'you' - example: You walk slowly towards me.
boi98229
11/5/20, 6:59 AM
i wrote a long comment and lost it!!! Suffice it to say for now that I love this story and am looking forward to reading more of this story and more from this author. Thanks for you great imagination, writing ability, and willingness to share it with the rest of us.
boi98229
11/5/20, 6:11 AM
OMG! After reading this chapter, i have such a hard on, and want to do exactly like Richard and the all the other stupid boys who asked to experience total mind control... and now more than ever a rubber gimp suit as well. i've always thought wanting to be a gimp was completely crazy, and i still think so. Yet more than ever i would love to at least experience that level of mind control! Coming back to my comments on how the *process* of seduction, induction and loss of control makes a story more arousing for me. Yeah, that! i still think so, but that said your story is still so so hot. i surrender to your imagination! Please just continue to take me wherever you like. You are the Master Storyteller. Please just write more! And thanks so much for your imagination, writing ability, and willingness to share it. ~david
Anonymous
11/5/20, 5:47 AM
I live to serve the virus