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boi98229
11/5/20, 4:44 AM
Just read this chapter again. Still found it very hot, and relate really closely to both characters. That said, i understand Nocturne's comment, and agree that with that additional detail this chapter could have been even more arousing. While as i had said, i like more detail about the techniques for induction, but perhaps what is even more exciting is the slow process of seduction and control. Again as Nocturne suggested (i still haven't read the second chapter), you can still (and now have hopefully) included more back and forth in this psychological duel in the next chapter. The other really important element for me is character development. By including more detail about Richard up front we would have been more committed to him during the seduction, and more in touch with his psyche as he realized his predicament. All that said, i am truly loving this story! It relates so closely with my own strong fetish for hypnosis, mind control, and surrender to a stronger Man. Without further ado, i am moving with great excitement onto the next chapter!! Thanks so much for this one!!
Anonymous
11/5/20, 3:59 AM
excellent
11/5/20, 3:57 AM
I hate the fact that I'm jealous of these people.
11/5/20, 3:47 AM
Damn that was hot. You did it again.
11/5/20, 3:42 AM
The rules have changed. The idea of a predetermined order gets overtaken by demonic beasts. hmmmmm...
11/5/20, 3:24 AM
Thank you everyone!! I appreciate the kind words! I have thought about another chapter, but we shall see! Thanks for reading :)
11/5/20, 2:47 AM
Pues en lo personal me hubiera gustado que Erick fuera el activo pero no importa. Estara bueno ver como poco a poco va obteniendo seguidores hasta que vaya por el jefaso~ Siempre es lindo leer historias en tu idioma :P
11/5/20, 1:34 AM
You really do have a way with ditz dialogue--love to see it.
11/4/20, 11:32 PM
Wow this was awesome! Pretty short and fun, I like it so much. Can't wait to see if theres gonna be more in the future!