Recent Comments

11/5/20, 3:24 AM
Thank you everyone!! I appreciate the kind words! I have thought about another chapter, but we shall see! Thanks for reading :)
11/5/20, 2:47 AM
Pues en lo personal me hubiera gustado que Erick fuera el activo pero no importa. Estara bueno ver como poco a poco va obteniendo seguidores hasta que vaya por el jefaso~ Siempre es lindo leer historias en tu idioma :P
11/5/20, 1:34 AM
You really do have a way with ditz dialogue--love to see it.
11/4/20, 11:32 PM
Wow this was awesome! Pretty short and fun, I like it so much. Can't wait to see if theres gonna be more in the future!
11/4/20, 9:42 PM
I've been making a habit of responding to the individual comments, but this time around I'll just say thanks guys! It seems like everyone kept pretty generic with their comments, probably to keep from spoiling the plot for others. Thanks for reading!
11/4/20, 9:36 PM
> Watching his transformation from would-be world conquerer to conflicted anti-villain to full-fledged hero was very fun to watch. > One of the things I enjoyed about writing this story was creating a universe, destroying it, and then recreating as like this "perfect vision of a gay future" Hmmmm.... I seem to make a habit out of doing this.
Cracker
11/4/20, 9:20 PM
loved it. It might be fun to have a part two where the psychic helps trap his superhero for the guy. :-)
11/4/20, 8:59 PM
The transformation was sexy. I am a bit confused on the mental nature of what is going on. What I mean is whether say Asher is sort of a big subby guy for the gay men he protects or if he is dominant. But anyway this is cool..
11/4/20, 8:57 PM
So I kind of hope Theodore uses his social 'magics' to make straight guys into good subby gay boys. hehe This is an interesting story.