Recent Comments

11/3/20, 11:27 PM
This was great. Hope to see more. But maybe not. Being short is where the magic is, right?
11/3/20, 10:58 PM
god i can't wait for more of this
11/3/20, 10:37 PM
it feels a little rushed... it could easily be developed into a longer story if you wanted
11/3/20, 10:31 PM
This sounds very promising! Excited for next installments.
JRL
11/3/20, 10:17 PM
REALLY hope a part two is in the works....
11/3/20, 9:48 PM
Loved this! Great twists and turns along the way!
11/3/20, 9:19 PM
This was awesome, very very awesome. Love the capture, play, release. Love how its all about the sexual fun and domination and not like death. So yesh this was great!
11/3/20, 9:16 PM
I hope their dad joins in the fun as well.
Anonymous
11/3/20, 8:41 PM
Got pretty stupid and lasted too long.
11/3/20, 7:12 PM
I love this new story. This chapter helped me rediscover it. I hope you keep it going! Your writing style is excellent and this particular storyline has so much potential!