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Martin
11/3/20, 10:56 AM
> this was unironically used. Can we not? How about keeping that sjw shit outside? The whole sentence reads: > You never miss a chance to proudly display your confederation flag to show much of a white suprematist you are. You used your straight white cis male privileges to influence many peers as the representative student in school, disrespecting whoever didn’t share the same traits as yours. And it's a statement made about a fictional person in this story. If I'm going to keep any "shit" outside, it's the word "Social Justice Warrior", because that's just a word used to discredit any person who's striving to see the world from differing point of views.
11/3/20, 10:20 AM
Excellent story! I always love stories where hypnotized slaves reinforce each other's programming.
11/3/20, 9:27 AM
"straight white cis male privileges" this was unironically used. Can we not? How about keeping that sjw shit outside?
Anonymous
11/3/20, 9:26 AM
spectacular
11/3/20, 9:13 AM
You should totally do a second part to this story. It was hotttt
11/3/20, 8:45 AM
Pauly just got the perfect responsible considerate brother. think he'd go for his daddy to help,as well?
11/3/20, 8:31 AM
Great chapter! :D And so the transformations begin...this one was incredibly hot, too. I also love that you depict the characters as trying to maintain a sense of normalcy among the insanity happening--it feels realistic! Now, as to my guesses. Asher is the first victim, so he's out; Larry seems too genuinely scared to be involved; Wesley is too obvious a choice, and his lack of empathy probably means he has a special punishment coming. Victor, Dimitri, and Braxton are too ambiguous to make a statement on, so they're maybes. Sebastian is suspicious because he's so average--could be a cover, plus he received a lot of focus as being unremarkable. Jenny is another possible choice--her costume is magical, after all. At first I discounted Mathilda because she was so drunk, but her odd demand for nail polish and suggestion of telling scary stories could be a means of keeping the group apart. Theo's magical costume and encouraging of taking the game seriously are also suspect. So if I have to guess, I'll guess Mathilda right now, and see where things go!
Hob
11/3/20, 8:27 AM
fantastic!
Wales
11/3/20, 8:10 AM
That was amazing, one of the hottest stories i have read in a while! You can never fully escape Master
11/3/20, 7:13 AM
Just read the whole series.....I hope you are going to continue it.