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11/3/20, 8:45 AM
Pauly just got the perfect responsible considerate brother. think he'd go for his daddy to help,as well?
11/3/20, 8:31 AM
Great chapter! :D And so the transformations begin...this one was incredibly hot, too. I also love that you depict the characters as trying to maintain a sense of normalcy among the insanity happening--it feels realistic! Now, as to my guesses. Asher is the first victim, so he's out; Larry seems too genuinely scared to be involved; Wesley is too obvious a choice, and his lack of empathy probably means he has a special punishment coming. Victor, Dimitri, and Braxton are too ambiguous to make a statement on, so they're maybes. Sebastian is suspicious because he's so average--could be a cover, plus he received a lot of focus as being unremarkable. Jenny is another possible choice--her costume is magical, after all. At first I discounted Mathilda because she was so drunk, but her odd demand for nail polish and suggestion of telling scary stories could be a means of keeping the group apart. Theo's magical costume and encouraging of taking the game seriously are also suspect. So if I have to guess, I'll guess Mathilda right now, and see where things go!
Hob
11/3/20, 8:27 AM
fantastic!
Wales
11/3/20, 8:10 AM
That was amazing, one of the hottest stories i have read in a while! You can never fully escape Master
11/3/20, 7:13 AM
Just read the whole series.....I hope you are going to continue it.
Martin
11/3/20, 6:51 AM
Could you please rename your series to "One of Us"? You can use the "administration" button in the Series view to rename the series. "OoU" is not a good name for a series! Contact me if you have questions (martin@gayspiralstories.com)
Lusty Stallion
11/3/20, 6:46 AM
Great new addition. Thanks man. Great work
MakeMeAPigToo
11/3/20, 6:14 AM
So hot and nasty! Love your dirty mind major! 🐷 🐷
11/3/20, 5:07 AM
"peer pressure, I'm far too sensitive" -Stu
11/3/20, 4:54 AM
gotta love a good fantasy read :)