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10/31/20, 10:54 PM
> Frankly, I left him out of the story for the same reason I got rid of Mr. Mac – it was just one more character that I would have to deal with that I didn’t need. That's fair. Keeping around characters who have served their purpose creates narrative clutter. I just thought that the mention that the Wizard was missing might be a subtle hint. I'll be curious to learn his final fate come Chapter 21.
10/31/20, 10:22 PM
I agree that the installments are too short--but only because I want more of this each time! Among other things, it's so hot that Stuart now thinks of the hat as *his* and slips it on without really thinking about it! Super excited for the next installment!
10/31/20, 9:35 PM
this is so good! Please write another chapter
Nutiper
10/31/20, 9:12 PM
Gosh, I know I'm biased because I got to watch this story being written, but I just love how cozy & autumnal this feels. A spooky, nostalgic, melancholic atmosphere... Plus, I always relate so heavily each time I read this line: > The first time that Sawyer turned that smile on Lock, the young man hadn’t been sure whether he wanted to befriend him or *be* him. I love these characters!
Lakritz24
10/31/20, 9:12 PM
Great Idea! I am just thinking about my Father, he s like S8J s and i believe, he has been putting some over me.
Mark
10/31/20, 9:09 PM
Amazing start. Can't wait for the next part!
Anonymous
10/31/20, 9:07 PM
thought there was gonna be more chapters?
Anonymous
10/31/20, 6:49 PM
is this the end or is there gonna be a put 4?
Anonymous
10/31/20, 6:48 PM
I'm also waiting to see if theres a part 5
Anonymous
10/31/20, 5:51 PM
This is so great, love the tension built...