Recent Comments

11/1/20, 7:15 PM
So happy to have more of this story! One of my personal faves!
11/1/20, 7:00 PM
Really love where it's going! Can't wait to see how much Stuart will have changed when Brad comes back! And at the end of the next day! So hot!
11/1/20, 6:52 PM
sounds like a promising story! it hits so many buttons already! good job!
11/1/20, 6:28 PM
Hot story. Hope there is more coming
Anonymous
11/1/20, 3:58 PM
this is really good! i find myself thinking about this story as i see borat trailers. please make another part? please?
11/1/20, 2:44 PM
@Robinhood70 more sheltered, the more delicious to corrupt ;)
oen6834
11/1/20, 2:14 PM
I really love this piece! That transformation is so hot! Will we see a sequel to this, with Bulldog taking over as commander? Great writing mate :D
11/1/20, 1:40 PM
An awesome start to a very well-written historical fiction story! I look forward to future chapters.
11/1/20, 10:47 AM
> I just thought that the mention that the Wizard was missing might be a subtle hint. > I considered having them discover him sitting in the car waiting, still obsessed with Vance, starving and filthy and afraid to leave the car for fear of the aliens (ala CUJO). But as you said... narrative clutter. Besides, Joe is a more experienced driver -- bet he bought his Jag from the Wizard, as well.
11/1/20, 5:45 AM
Great beginning! I look forward to the party and what happens next.