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Lex
10/31/20, 10:03 AM
why are there always rebels in perfect worlds ? ;) (not a question i need answers for) I love this drone universe :) i would like to see a normal drone enhanced to a far more loyal and obedient security Drone. Why are the drones color coded, if they had a hud in their masks ? how are their reproduction cycle ? Are there raids to align the rebels into the system ? What happens, if some drone accidentally get POLLuted from some symbiontplant from POLLINATION and get a symbiont into his balls ? So many questions. Can't wait for chapter 2 ;))
10/31/20, 4:34 AM
Oh, and the part about when Matt steps on the cum-stained floor and he starts saying "Get it off, getioffgetitoffgetitoff!" it made me laugh. I liked it x3
10/31/20, 4:31 AM
@Moby It is definitely one of the best types of hypnosis. I intend to write a story with that kind of concept, long and subtle induction with a small group of tough friends trying to keep the spell free ... and failing, of course. I have some ideas. Your story has been excellent :) And I like how you made everything cute and naughty. And it's your story, you are in control. As I say I loved everything, I just liked Billy a lot, the way he fell first and faster I liked it, also he seemed kind and loving with his friends, and I admit that I wanted to see Billy trying have sex or something with his friends unaware of his own transformation. But the story is perfectly as it is. Awww, I love the Frankenstein costume x3
10/31/20, 3:48 AM
Glad to see the next phase of the drone world and that you completed the draft of this chapter. It's very enjoyable and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
Anonymous
10/31/20, 3:03 AM
This could be have been developed into a short three installment series. It was rushed, but it was hot!!!
10/31/20, 2:25 AM
Yeah, but I like where its going. It's already looks like Brad is overdoing it, Stuart might end more Trucker and Redneckier than him.
10/31/20, 1:59 AM
what about the pirate that had the massive magic cock that turned guys into the perfect bottom? totally wish idve been his first "victim" lol
Ng5hvlo4
10/31/20, 1:31 AM
A good comment; thank you. Let me explain. The stories as they are now are not wholly complete. The first series shows the beginning of some changes that lead to a few drones. The second series shows those drones serving human masters, While slowly introducing how the numbers of drones increases. What's missing in the second series is how the number of drones has increased so dramatically that we get to the third series. The third series is when most of humanity are drones, now in service to the Artificial intelligence that started it all, Jake. I'm working on all three series in parallel because that is how my inspiration strikes me. It's hard to write only one setting; it's easier if I can jump back-and-forth. It gives the chance to communicate with the readers and refine. And it's not like I planned all of this when I first started writing; it has evolved. This evolution has prompted an ongoing series of stories and refinements to existing stories that is still ongoing and that will only get better by communications such as these.
Moby
10/31/20, 1:17 AM
@ Hypno-Tales Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed it~ For me, slow burn is the best type for mind control. Following a protagonist that is resistant at first and them seeing all the weird changes around, not noticing it's happening to them too. As for Billy, I admit I never really had that much planned for him. The main two characters were always going to be Matt and Conor. Billy was there to be the one who changes fast so that the two could interact with someone going through the changes. But if I had to say where Billy fell a hundred percent into his trance, I'd say it was during gym class, with the Master paying the team a visit and making them fall completley and having them stop playing the game and start screwing right then and there. As for his costume, Billy was meant to be a Frankstein's Monster. Tattered shirt with a jacket over top, dark hair. I kinda forgot to add the detail of the two metal pegs on his neck. My bad~
10/31/20, 12:52 AM
I loved it. From beginning to end. Since I'm neither English nor American, I can't comment on the speech and accents, but I liked the little details like Conor singing "metric" when Matt talked about miles, for example. What I have liked the most is undoubtedly the slow evolution of the story, the subtle progressive way in which they fall into a collective trance. The way Billy doesn't realize the food tastes sweet, or the way he wears a tattered black shirt ... or how Conor and Matt think they're going without any change but they're barefoot. Overall, I found it to be a delightful story, charming as well as sexy, funny and intriguing. And I really liked the different cute costumes. If I had to mention something that I would have liked to be different, it would be that I wish I had had more interventions from Billy. I would have liked to see more about that strong boy friend of Conor and Matt, he seemed like a very interesting and charming (and sexy) character, and I would have liked to have seen a scene where we see him completely fall into a trance. Or that he had a naughty role in the finale, when Matt is tied up in the chair. And I'm not sure what his costume was. Other than that, this is a great story!