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10/31/20, 11:01 AM
Wait, I just noticed something: Wizwell is MIA. I completely glossed over it in the heat of the moment, but in the process of rereading the chapter, I noticed that Joe only volunteers to drive when the Variants mention that they don't know where their driver is. I'm going to go out on a limb and say that Wizwell got the hell out of dodge when they all got to the farm. Knowing you, I have a feeling that's going to come into play in a future chapter.
Jason
10/31/20, 10:40 AM
This was amazing! Please write a continuation, it really needs to continue.
Lex
10/31/20, 10:03 AM
why are there always rebels in perfect worlds ? ;) (not a question i need answers for) I love this drone universe :) i would like to see a normal drone enhanced to a far more loyal and obedient security Drone. Why are the drones color coded, if they had a hud in their masks ? how are their reproduction cycle ? Are there raids to align the rebels into the system ? What happens, if some drone accidentally get POLLuted from some symbiontplant from POLLINATION and get a symbiont into his balls ? So many questions. Can't wait for chapter 2 ;))
10/31/20, 4:34 AM
Oh, and the part about when Matt steps on the cum-stained floor and he starts saying "Get it off, getioffgetitoffgetitoff!" it made me laugh. I liked it x3
10/31/20, 4:31 AM
@Moby It is definitely one of the best types of hypnosis. I intend to write a story with that kind of concept, long and subtle induction with a small group of tough friends trying to keep the spell free ... and failing, of course. I have some ideas. Your story has been excellent :) And I like how you made everything cute and naughty. And it's your story, you are in control. As I say I loved everything, I just liked Billy a lot, the way he fell first and faster I liked it, also he seemed kind and loving with his friends, and I admit that I wanted to see Billy trying have sex or something with his friends unaware of his own transformation. But the story is perfectly as it is. Awww, I love the Frankenstein costume x3
10/31/20, 3:48 AM
Glad to see the next phase of the drone world and that you completed the draft of this chapter. It's very enjoyable and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
Anonymous
10/31/20, 3:03 AM
This could be have been developed into a short three installment series. It was rushed, but it was hot!!!
10/31/20, 2:25 AM
Yeah, but I like where its going. It's already looks like Brad is overdoing it, Stuart might end more Trucker and Redneckier than him.
10/31/20, 1:59 AM
what about the pirate that had the massive magic cock that turned guys into the perfect bottom? totally wish idve been his first "victim" lol
Ng5hvlo4
10/31/20, 1:31 AM
A good comment; thank you. Let me explain. The stories as they are now are not wholly complete. The first series shows the beginning of some changes that lead to a few drones. The second series shows those drones serving human masters, While slowly introducing how the numbers of drones increases. What's missing in the second series is how the number of drones has increased so dramatically that we get to the third series. The third series is when most of humanity are drones, now in service to the Artificial intelligence that started it all, Jake. I'm working on all three series in parallel because that is how my inspiration strikes me. It's hard to write only one setting; it's easier if I can jump back-and-forth. It gives the chance to communicate with the readers and refine. And it's not like I planned all of this when I first started writing; it has evolved. This evolution has prompted an ongoing series of stories and refinements to existing stories that is still ongoing and that will only get better by communications such as these.