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10/30/20, 8:42 PM
I like a few stories on here that get right to the point :) Sometimes these 10,000 plus word ten chapter opus works can be challenging to keep following over multiple installments. Thanks for this story!
10/30/20, 8:39 PM
loved this! we need more stories like this.
Anonymous
10/30/20, 7:40 PM
I am sure there are guys wearing superhero spandex outfit, why not fullfill their desire to become super? Great Image-story! many thanks!
10/30/20, 7:31 PM
why not turn a gethering of a conservative party into a gay rally?
nycboot
10/30/20, 7:23 PM
A wonderful chapter - thank you! It's interesting that at the outset, it seems as if the symbiont totally took over the human host. But now we see that there's a lot of nuance there (at least for now?). The soldier subplot never really interested me that much but I see it supplies a lot of momentum and build up to the various threads. You didn't mention it here but I'm really curious about the new "Great One" and what's to become of the deputy. It seems that when a human becomes a great one, most of his human desires are removed and he's just a vessel for the symbiont. Anyway, lots of good stuff to ponder and j/o to. :)
10/30/20, 7:03 PM
Definitely have to agree that it's a bit rushed. Emilio has all the time in the world, so he could really sink his hooks not only into Hank but into the other guards. Hell he could be running the prison if he wanted to. The idea asks for a slow burn approach to it.
Tanner
10/30/20, 6:57 PM
Thanks for the kind words everyone. I have really enjoyed writing this. And good suggestions tiny tim. I will do my best to write more as soon as I can. The nice comments definitely help motivate me.
10/30/20, 6:40 PM
So is the Lieutenant going to make Devin a full symbiont or just a familiar? I propose familiar since it would fit into the military hierarchy; Devin did come through for them but they still gotta see if he has the material to be a member of the squad full time.
10/30/20, 5:39 PM
It did seem a bit rushed. Would like to have read more of Hank's transition from ladies' man to cocksucker.
10/30/20, 5:33 PM
Little sad that this change made him forget/unaware of what the wish did to him. Nice to see his "friends" getting sucked into it too. Keep up the hot work :)