Recent Comments

Drake Nightstrom
10/30/20, 3:39 PM
There's only one way to find out.
10/30/20, 3:36 PM
I LOVED Chapter 66! The "HAIL GREAT ONE" scene is the kind of thing I've been hoping to see for weeks, and you didn't disappoint!
10/30/20, 3:35 PM
I just hope the ending is not tragic or gory, the turn me of a lot, and pretty quicklly
Drake Nightstrom
10/30/20, 3:31 PM
Love the feedback! Thanks so much! I am enjoying this venture into a semi spooky story. I do hope that you all like the ending I have planned. I think there is one more chapter here then an epilogue. Who knows, maybe I will become possessed and write more.
10/30/20, 3:29 PM
Okay, now we're cooking with gas! The enslavement was sexy and sinister, just the way I like it. It's a stroke of luck- pun intended- that Joe had to tap out so early. It seems that one's enthrallment to the Great One is proportionate to how much damage his healing repaired. I was expecting Joe to have to watch Tony and all the other men turn into blank-faced drones, but it seems like the Great One is interested in a little bit more foreplay now than he was than when he erased Murdock. I do confess to feeling bad for Mr. Mac, his boys no longer have any feelings for him. But I'm sure we'll be seeing a confrontation between Joe, Lane, Snake, Deputy, Rugby Boy, and the Variants in 18 or 19- can't wait to see how that one pans out! I'm curious to see if the Lt. plans to simply turn Devin into his familiar like Lane and Snake did with the Deputy and Rugby Boy, or if he's going to reward him with a plant of his own. And I'm still waiting for the Chekov's Gun that is those unaccounted-for plants Snake and Rugby Boy found to go off...
10/30/20, 2:20 PM
yes,punish him Daddy. I really hope Matt finds someone again soon. Such a hunk shouldn't be alone
10/30/20, 1:55 PM
I like where this is going, and I think I know how it will end, but a fun alternate ending would be if the tables turned and Kobe became the suicidal one once Mortimer rejects him, and the Faery Godfather gave Mortimer five stars. But dont change the direction this story is going... I like it a lot
10/30/20, 1:31 PM
hope there will be more chapters after this adjustment
Richard Redman
10/30/20, 1:20 PM
I live to serve the virus.
10/30/20, 1:12 PM
A good shameless. Its like, I wish I could have had a little of that naive upbringing, in the right hands...