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12/15/24, 4:14 PM
great to see a new story - very hot. where will it go from here ?

12/16/24, 5:34 PM
@[eastbay](/user/show/1576204) I'm toying around with some cute ideas in my head, but nothing set in stone yet. Probably Jese getting the silly idea of going on a date with his uncle.

1/17/25, 6:16 PM
@[autoDream](/user/show/20698) Wow. Please yes.
Elm
1/17/25, 5:52 PM
One of my favorite of yours, would love to see where you take this someday!
1/17/25, 5:47 PM
Incredible
1/17/25, 3:40 PM
There is definitely something enthralling about a dominant man so in control of his life and business -- his business being that of manipulating and controlling other men's minds and lives. Even at the risk of being swatted, I'd love to be a fly on the wall at the good doctor's upcoming retreat. Thanks for such an arousing story. i do hope there will be more!
1/17/25, 8:20 AM
You did so well with Malvin and his personality, made it so easy to hope for a life lesson. Then you make it reasonable almost desirable that we get to love the new and improved Malvin.
1/17/25, 7:51 AM
Hot! Love the humiliation. Though as fun as it is seeing an arrogant prince be taken down, I would rather see several of his hunky royal guards to be debased alongside him and used by the orcs. I prefer to seeing muscular handsome victims, stripped of their dignity and pride and though the prince is handsome, from his description hes not quite the hunky sort of man that his guards are. Hoping that a muscular royal guard from a aristocratic linage or their captain be brutally taken down and shamed. Unless he has a hunky older brother whos coming to search for him later?
1/17/25, 4:25 AM
Love seing you back man!!! Really great story
1/16/25, 9:49 PM
Great start to a leaky boner inducing story. Can’t wait for more. πŸ†πŸ’¦πŸ’¦

1/17/25, 4:22 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it. I'm working on chapter 2 now :)
essay
1/17/25, 3:52 AM
Amazing work as always. I love how the goo factor keeps amping up every chapter -- it reminds me of the dream sequence from the end of Chapter 3 of *The Wrestler*. A similar image came to mind as I was reading this: an unstoppable flood of black ooze spreading across the globe, slowly but surely rubberizing everyone and everything in its path... :drooling_face: I forgot to mention this before, but I love the way you've handled Tyson's transformation in this story. On the one hand, he's currently just a mindless tool of the Mainframe, but on the other hand, his personality still exists, ready to resurface at any time. It's a simple setup, but I think it splits the difference between "total mind erasure" and "completely independent personality who happens to wear a rubber suit" pretty well. Plus, I think it just makes more sense from an in-universe perspective: Why would the Mainframe delete a perfectly good mind when it could put it to use to ensna -- I mean, assim -- I mean, **upgrade** more men? So yeah, I'm looking forward to Tyson's reaction when he's brought back out. Personally, I think he'll be pumped to see how much his body has been improved, and excited to find out how the Mainframe plans to further exploit his unique abilities. Call it a hunch, but I'm guessing he may have a very hot, very *messy* locker room orgy in his near future. All that said, I have to say I'm a little confused why a few commenters seem to be sad or disappointed by Tyson's fate. I'm thinking they might need to make an appointment with an Injection Drone so they can get their heads sorted out. :wink: Although...thinking on it, I guess things *are* a little more fun when the drones-to-be try to fight the inevitable. :smiling_imp: Speaking of which, I wonder if we'll get any more development on that journalist character from a couple chapters back? Sorry if I'm going a little overboard with the analysis and speculation here, but this world has grabbed me by the balls and doesn't seem to be letting me go anytime soon!
1/17/25, 3:00 AM
Excellent!!