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10/30/20, 9:56 AM
great job please continue.
10/30/20, 9:24 AM
Classic
boi98229
10/30/20, 8:56 AM
i love the story and the conversation following the computerized hypnosis session. i can't imagine how incredibly confusing Dylan would have found the conversation since he was forgetting important parts of the conversation all along the way. It seemed to me that this conversation would have played a key function in cementing the power exchange created during the computerized session. It would be really fascinating if you were to include a copy of the file Dylan watched at the end of his training! Thanks so much for such a hot story!!
10/30/20, 8:50 AM
so, Are Marin and Josh gay now? pr they will become soon?
boi98229
10/30/20, 8:28 AM
That level of mind control would be so incredibly exciting! i would love to be able to provide that kind of opportunity for fun, games, and pleasure to such a powerful Man! One of my favorite aspects of a good D/s story is the process of seduction. Nicely written; good pacing on the buildup. i easily accept all premises of power exchange stories like this, but personally generally prefer a little more detail on the technical approach used to take control. Overall i really loved the story and hope to read more in the near future.
Lusty Stallion
10/30/20, 8:14 AM
Yes! So hot. Loved it! The interest with Josh and Martin is brilliant. Look's like Mortimer's getting what he wants, and Koby's becoming a decent person (and a hot as fuck one to!)
10/30/20, 7:50 AM
I so loved this story. I hope there is more chapters
giveintothemusk
10/30/20, 7:34 AM
This is friggin great.
10/30/20, 6:44 AM
Interesting, though due to it's length it felt a tad rushed. I'd have liked to see more of the induction process with both Hank's trancing, as well as his brainwashing. Very enjoyable, thank you for the read!
10/30/20, 6:11 AM
thank you all for the feedback! I am going to take it all into consideration and try to make it work with where the story takes me. It seems like the consensus is that going back to refocus on a loli-POP boy or possibly a pup going through the process of being chosen, enrolled and 'educated' is what most of my readers would like me to do with the story direction. that's pretty fair, as even I really admire the induction going on with Benjamin becoming Benji. I'm REALLY interested in Nerdysuitedbaby's suggestion that someone strongly attempt to fight the process, but I don't think that Cody would be a good student to follow for it. Humm. brainstorming is half the fun.