Recent Comments

10/30/20, 6:11 AM
thank you all for the feedback! I am going to take it all into consideration and try to make it work with where the story takes me. It seems like the consensus is that going back to refocus on a loli-POP boy or possibly a pup going through the process of being chosen, enrolled and 'educated' is what most of my readers would like me to do with the story direction. that's pretty fair, as even I really admire the induction going on with Benjamin becoming Benji. I'm REALLY interested in Nerdysuitedbaby's suggestion that someone strongly attempt to fight the process, but I don't think that Cody would be a good student to follow for it. Humm. brainstorming is half the fun.
10/30/20, 6:02 AM
I gotta agree with Tempest888, please take all the time you need to write when you can and don't overtax yourself. your loyal fan base is here and we will remain here just as well off as we were before, we're all grown up here, we can handle the wait. and the wait was so worth it yet again. OH MY GODS. I love the added dimension of Jake starting to feel overtaxed with his abilities. Is his power wearing off, or is it evolving somehow? Are we finally seeing a kind of cost to the space rock, or is this a fluke? I am delighted to wait to find out!
10/30/20, 5:46 AM
I'm glad you liked it, man! And yeah, the story is pretty shameless - just me living out some fantasies I had while playing D&D and reading fantasy novels. And you're absolutely right, it would be a lot of fun if we could live like this... ~ sigh. I'm planning for some new chapters soon, I'll let you know when they're up ;)
10/30/20, 4:57 AM
I love this series. Please make another chapter.
Leo
10/30/20, 4:51 AM
Yay I’m so glad you’re back!! Your stories are my favorite on here, we’re both into the younger dude having complete control over these sexy older daddies. I think you’re doing a great job, really hot stuff in this chapter! I’d love to see David fall deeper in his master’s spell. Become totally submissive to his young master. Since David is so tall and muscular I feel like he’d a make a good horse, whenever he’s at home with his master he will offer his services so his master won’t have to walk instead he’ll just ride him. I also think he should become a foot stool and become obsessed with serving his masters feet.
Anonymous
10/30/20, 4:37 AM
absolutely loved. had to pause and suit up... the nectar tasted fantastic... did really go for the physical punishment... but hey... mmv...
Ravenclaw
10/30/20, 3:38 AM
cant wait for more.
Lusty Stallion
10/30/20, 1:05 AM
Thanks man. What a great story. Can't wait for the next part
Anonymous
10/30/20, 12:46 AM
An interesting and well written piece, but the lack of line breaks makes for a wall of text that can be an awkward read when there’s a lot of dialogue going on. Some extra spacing would go a long way to improve the readability of the work :)