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10/29/20, 8:08 AM
personally, I care most about Benji and the other lollipop boys. love the concept of daddy enrolling them and picking them up from school. the role of it being a school feels less impactful for other stories like drones and butlers. Would be curious to hear more about benjis adventures in the real world after all of this or another boy from lollipop if its not too repetitive. Cheers!
10/29/20, 7:37 AM
I like this. Looking forward to chapter 2 and more.
10/29/20, 7:19 AM
Amazing chapter! I'm excited to see how Jake will take things further with David. Maybe give the captain an extreme leather/cigar fetish (I honestly have a huge thing for big, beefy, bearded, leather clad, cigar men). I love the submissive masculine daddy harem that he's built. Honestly, your stories are unique in the way you describe and portray each scene, sexual or not. You're a great writer and story teller, but please, take it easy. I know you have a very eager audience, but considering your situation, just don't overdo it. We all waited this long for another chapter, we're not going anywhere, so take as long as you need.
10/29/20, 6:45 AM
Amazing story!!!! 💙💙💙 please continue, it really was one of the best stories I read in a long time!
HunksLover
10/29/20, 6:45 AM
This is Great! i Hope that the next chapter gets some more slutty slaves next!
Aug 7, 2018
magicboy2005@aol.com
10/29/20, 6:41 AM
I have read this story before, finally got around to rating it. I love the idea of the fat gained from the food moving around the body to be placed at other body parts, and really hot descriptions! I would love to read more from you and read a continuation of how the other frat guys transform
10/29/20, 4:20 AM
Wow dude, I love the outline you have here for the future of the story. And yeah, I agree with you that Jese should still be bratty and a little resistant to the full slutty mode on Star World. This will give us a nice build up in the story and make everything sweeter. I wanted to use this opportunity to actually refer you to my stories, if possible. One of them is called World of Erotus and is actually a D&D-esque erotic story set in a fantasy world, so I think you might like that! I have also published the Slutty Naughty Jock series and just posted yesterday a new story called Dumb Jock Roommate. I'm actually thinking of posting them here on the site as well, I think maybe they will be a good fit. Anyway, give them a read if you want, I hope you like them, and I would love to hear your thoughts! https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/world-of-erotus/ https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/college/dumb-jock-roommate https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/incest/slutty-naughty-jock/
10/29/20, 2:32 AM
this is great love the story so much
10/29/20, 1:47 AM
I really, really hope this story isn't dead. This is one of the best slow burn transformation and role-reversal stories on here.
Anonymous
10/29/20, 12:40 AM
i live to servr the virus