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Aug 7, 2018
magicboy2005@aol.com
10/29/20, 6:41 AM
I have read this story before, finally got around to rating it. I love the idea of the fat gained from the food moving around the body to be placed at other body parts, and really hot descriptions! I would love to read more from you and read a continuation of how the other frat guys transform
10/29/20, 4:20 AM
Wow dude, I love the outline you have here for the future of the story. And yeah, I agree with you that Jese should still be bratty and a little resistant to the full slutty mode on Star World. This will give us a nice build up in the story and make everything sweeter. I wanted to use this opportunity to actually refer you to my stories, if possible. One of them is called World of Erotus and is actually a D&D-esque erotic story set in a fantasy world, so I think you might like that! I have also published the Slutty Naughty Jock series and just posted yesterday a new story called Dumb Jock Roommate. I'm actually thinking of posting them here on the site as well, I think maybe they will be a good fit. Anyway, give them a read if you want, I hope you like them, and I would love to hear your thoughts! https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/world-of-erotus/ https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/college/dumb-jock-roommate https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/incest/slutty-naughty-jock/
10/29/20, 2:32 AM
this is great love the story so much
10/29/20, 1:47 AM
I really, really hope this story isn't dead. This is one of the best slow burn transformation and role-reversal stories on here.
Anonymous
10/29/20, 12:40 AM
i live to servr the virus
10/28/20, 11:07 PM
Woof! What a creative story! I really enjoyed having cum as the central role.
Zac
10/28/20, 10:40 PM
Fucking HOT! Looking forward to Chapter 2.
10/28/20, 10:14 PM
@Rspark: why do you say that? Just cuz he's a well-behaved mama's boy?
Evan
10/28/20, 10:09 PM
What a story. The ending in particular, forced to use their cum on each other. Exquisite! Well done.
Shadow
10/28/20, 10:01 PM
oh my God this was hot. i can't wait for the next