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Evan
10/28/20, 10:09 PM
What a story. The ending in particular, forced to use their cum on each other. Exquisite! Well done.
Shadow
10/28/20, 10:01 PM
oh my God this was hot. i can't wait for the next
10/28/20, 9:03 PM
I would love it if the younger bro. would continue to give his older bro. more attitude & memory adjustments, making him believe that he has always actually been the younger -little brother. His memories should be altered so that he believes that he was the one bullied in school [and deserved to be],& that he always looked-up to his 'older' & much more manly brother. However he should believe he deserved this treatment by his manly brother & his friends because he's always been such a weak little immature guy..Perhaps he should start behaving in a much more 'child-like' manner, even wetting his pants when he gets excited [& believing that he's always had to wear diapers under his pants. In addition to sucking his thumb]...Also when the two brothers go out, the NOW younger one should feel that all other guys are SUPERIOR to him, like his NOW OLDER brother..& treat them as such.. [also, he would no longer think of his girlfriend, or any women in a sexual manner, but more like mother's or nursemaids & babysitters.... When he thinks of his own dick, it is no longer his formally 8incher, but now IN HIS OWN MIND He sees a tiny, little-boy nub !!!.....Then perhaps [in a chapter #3], in addition to the now younger bro becoming totally gay, His formally younger brother would finally use his machine ON HIMSELF [!!!], and once and for all, turning himself into the manly older brother that he would like to be : HAPPY ENDING !!!
10/28/20, 8:29 PM
Ethans are always gonna be the sought after bottoms.
10/28/20, 5:23 PM
Really loved this i love that in the beginning we don't know too many details about what's really going on because Matt isn't ready to integrate this information, and the story unfolds over time. By the time it got to assplay i was over the moon. Also loved the detail about how commenting on how much hair is on a guy's ass counts as art criticism! Ha!
10/28/20, 5:20 PM
Every story you write is exquisite! Thank!
10/28/20, 5:18 PM
i loved this so much. keep up the good work.
10/28/20, 4:02 PM
everything is so good here. the wair was totally worth it
10/28/20, 2:16 PM
![](https://media1.tenor.com/images/94dac8f33fea8a9e9c92a42b18ca46ac/tenor.gif?itemid=5372593) Jokes aside, great chapter! :) The wait was worth it. The coach has become my favorite character so far and I like his new story arc. I think it gives him a new dimension as a character, other than being the "slutty fuck toy".
10/28/20, 1:18 PM
Thank you thank you!!~ I'm glad you enjoyed it that much! I think you've probably read by now how I feel about it as well. In terms of Star World, I definitely think we can start to open Jese up to some more slutty scenarios. I think he is still going to be a little bratty or hesitant, but in the right environment, heavily struggle to deny temptation. I think I have a little work to do before he fully starts to slut it up willingly, or at least with more ease, but that is being worked on. Imagine a gaming system able to make you think you are literally in a fantasy world like Lord of the Rings or Final Fantasy, and despite loving competitive PVP/PVE fantasy RPGs, you are so tilted by the mind melting fuck you just got 4 times that you opt to try a dating sim... Partly because you are too scared to try going on a date with someone in real life, but mostly because you are so hyper curious about what might happen in this modded dating sim. I can pretty much mess around with whatever now. The Mindgear opens us to that, but I definitely want to get back into Star World... But also, I think the Mindgear might be the perfect way to introduce an idea very similar to the Island, but different, but as a game. Something to really hook Jese into a gay (hypnosis) world and mess around with his mind.