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10/28/20, 5:23 PM
Really loved this i love that in the beginning we don't know too many details about what's really going on because Matt isn't ready to integrate this information, and the story unfolds over time. By the time it got to assplay i was over the moon. Also loved the detail about how commenting on how much hair is on a guy's ass counts as art criticism! Ha!
10/28/20, 5:20 PM
Every story you write is exquisite! Thank!
10/28/20, 5:18 PM
i loved this so much. keep up the good work.
10/28/20, 4:02 PM
everything is so good here. the wair was totally worth it
10/28/20, 2:16 PM
![](https://media1.tenor.com/images/94dac8f33fea8a9e9c92a42b18ca46ac/tenor.gif?itemid=5372593) Jokes aside, great chapter! :) The wait was worth it. The coach has become my favorite character so far and I like his new story arc. I think it gives him a new dimension as a character, other than being the "slutty fuck toy".
10/28/20, 1:18 PM
Thank you thank you!!~ I'm glad you enjoyed it that much! I think you've probably read by now how I feel about it as well. In terms of Star World, I definitely think we can start to open Jese up to some more slutty scenarios. I think he is still going to be a little bratty or hesitant, but in the right environment, heavily struggle to deny temptation. I think I have a little work to do before he fully starts to slut it up willingly, or at least with more ease, but that is being worked on. Imagine a gaming system able to make you think you are literally in a fantasy world like Lord of the Rings or Final Fantasy, and despite loving competitive PVP/PVE fantasy RPGs, you are so tilted by the mind melting fuck you just got 4 times that you opt to try a dating sim... Partly because you are too scared to try going on a date with someone in real life, but mostly because you are so hyper curious about what might happen in this modded dating sim. I can pretty much mess around with whatever now. The Mindgear opens us to that, but I definitely want to get back into Star World... But also, I think the Mindgear might be the perfect way to introduce an idea very similar to the Island, but different, but as a game. Something to really hook Jese into a gay (hypnosis) world and mess around with his mind.
10/28/20, 1:14 PM
omgggg finally!!! Thank you for this! It's time to read this and savour every words on this!
Captainlordgallifre
10/28/20, 1:09 PM
Really loving these stories, great progression, I cannot wait to see what happens next <3
10/28/20, 11:29 AM
Just reread this again. Hoping that you're sfae and well and that you have a new story in the works! Your writing is amazing, and I would love to see more!
10/28/20, 11:03 AM
amazing chapter,was definitely worth the wait. Intrigued to see what's wrong with Carter... And I agree to the comments above,we hope to see more of captain David. Can't let such a big burly powerful man walk around without a good fuck