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10/28/20, 1:18 PM
Thank you thank you!!~ I'm glad you enjoyed it that much! I think you've probably read by now how I feel about it as well. In terms of Star World, I definitely think we can start to open Jese up to some more slutty scenarios. I think he is still going to be a little bratty or hesitant, but in the right environment, heavily struggle to deny temptation. I think I have a little work to do before he fully starts to slut it up willingly, or at least with more ease, but that is being worked on. Imagine a gaming system able to make you think you are literally in a fantasy world like Lord of the Rings or Final Fantasy, and despite loving competitive PVP/PVE fantasy RPGs, you are so tilted by the mind melting fuck you just got 4 times that you opt to try a dating sim... Partly because you are too scared to try going on a date with someone in real life, but mostly because you are so hyper curious about what might happen in this modded dating sim. I can pretty much mess around with whatever now. The Mindgear opens us to that, but I definitely want to get back into Star World... But also, I think the Mindgear might be the perfect way to introduce an idea very similar to the Island, but different, but as a game. Something to really hook Jese into a gay (hypnosis) world and mess around with his mind.
10/28/20, 1:14 PM
omgggg finally!!! Thank you for this! It's time to read this and savour every words on this!
Captainlordgallifre
10/28/20, 1:09 PM
Really loving these stories, great progression, I cannot wait to see what happens next <3
10/28/20, 11:29 AM
Just reread this again. Hoping that you're sfae and well and that you have a new story in the works! Your writing is amazing, and I would love to see more!
10/28/20, 11:03 AM
amazing chapter,was definitely worth the wait. Intrigued to see what's wrong with Carter... And I agree to the comments above,we hope to see more of captain David. Can't let such a big burly powerful man walk around without a good fuck
10/28/20, 10:18 AM
This was a fantastic story. Love the older brother being controlled by the younger. Hope they both end up at the same college.
Oct 2, 2006
10/28/20, 10:11 AM
> I enjoyed the start of the story. I am looking forward to reading additional chapters. > I just re-read it myself a few weeks ago to submit it to a story contest. It holds up well. I still am glad the SERIES doesn't directly sequel it, tho. I like the ending as it reads.
10/28/20, 8:07 AM
So great! I missed this story. I hope we can see more of David in the future :)
10/28/20, 7:50 AM
to put my raving review short: great chapter. Love cops. Love obliviousness. Came multiple times while reading. Hope Matt gets fucked good soon. Hope his boys will be in on it,too
10/28/20, 7:45 AM
wow it's worth the wait, i like your story so far. but i hope the MC makes the police captain to be more feminine and girly towards the MC. anyway good job man, you are good writer.