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10/28/20, 12:34 AM
Sorry but I strongly disagree with Hypnothrill imo. I found your long submission thrilling and refreshing. Sometimes a good hypnosis conversion needs some length and detail to it. It is beautifully written and I do not usually read stories where the 1st person victim. U and swizzington are doing good work lol
10/27/20, 11:50 PM
Thank you thank you~ One of my favorite things about writing these stories is describing my fall to the baddies. It works to different effect with different styles, but for the most part it works out. Glad you enjoy that part as well. I think that is why I tend to enjoy first person style, despite 3rd person being the norm. Yeah, Colin is definitely a bomb to consider. He is less of a threat in terms of the online stuff, since Colin doesn't really game so he probably wouldn't ever discover the manipulation directly. I'd imagine he would have to catch the two in the act, in real life, or half-and-half (if Dennis tried sneaking into his room mid session again). Could be something to explore down the road, or maybe its just a nice way to keep Jese on his toes. That desire of needing to make sure his brother doesn't find out, but still getting cock. Jese probably won't go out of his way to risk it for the biscuit, but the world is a big place. Once Jese figures out what he wants, he will realize what to do. Although Dennis will probably still force him to risk during his next drunk sleepover.
10/27/20, 11:49 PM
I meant that only those 2 can make wishes or the whole school can?
nycboot
10/27/20, 11:26 PM
Damn this story has turned out to be amazing. One of my favorite characteristics in these stories is watching the "victim" struggle and deal with his new identity and your writing covers that in spades! I love it. I'm just wondering: if Colin finds out that Dennis influenced his younger brother, he might be furious with Dennis. So Jese need not be so fearful.
Drake Nightstrom
10/27/20, 10:17 PM
Oh, Darkblade2814. How do you know it hasn't affected the whole school? I guess only time will tell. *wink*
10/27/20, 9:28 PM
I think he will, in the end for the sake of getting the money for his alpha Dan. He would sell every part of his body there, like his ass, his feet, just for the sake to get the most of money he can ;)
10/27/20, 9:26 PM
will the wishes be restricted by just those two or will it affect the whole school?
10/27/20, 9:12 PM
Very excited to see where this goes!
10/27/20, 9:03 PM
Love the power reversal! (and the inclusion of feet)
10/27/20, 8:58 PM
Yeah, the part of me that played Dennis definitely made the Jese part of me quiver when I got pulled into his lap. But thanks for the very kind compliments! Glad you enjoy my writing, and hopefully I will have many more stories to share. Working on a special story for a friend, and then I think right back into a new arc of Star World. Might dance with the writing competition halloween thing. @Heru. Thanks as always for the kind words. Sounds like I got you with this one. And I got myself too. I enjoy sex, but I really felt like I got into it a lot this chapter.