@hypnothrill I did not finish it in one sitting either but I still kept coming back to read it all because it was so good. Long writing can be tedious I understand: if the writing is bad. But the writing and the hypnosis/mind control procedure was so detailed and well crafted (not just put you under and take your clothes off lazy writing) that it felt good to be patient in completing it. Idk I guess I prefer something well thought out but very long and slow over multiple pumped out stories that takes one sitting to read and can be pumped out simultaneously by the author but is basic as hell and sometimes leave you dissatisfied. Sometimes quantity just works, especially when the author composes it well and knows how to take their time with it. Might not be your cup of tea but I do implore you to read the whole story.

just sitting here waiting for chap 15 :)

@SkySoda: Don't get me wrong; I also loved the slow pace and level of detail. I just wasn't able to finish it all in one sitting. In fact, I stopped reading after the first scene at Vincente's house, and I haven't yet gone back to finish the chapter.

*Whew.* This story is both kinda disturbing and also so damn hot. The dog-headed men with their addictive, aphrodisiac cum, which can break a man's mind if they cum in him because it feels so damn good... Then, them thinking they're going to set out and start "conquering" humans... and immediately getting captured and having their own cum turned on themselves... Oh man. Cotton watching his older brother "break" under the influence of his own cum, and then knowing it's about to happen to him too— Also, this moment where the intelligent, cocky Tristin is close to "breaking" and practically begging for it, and starts licking his captor's hand: > **–Wanna break!–** He wiggled against the frame. One of the humans tentatively extended a hand in front of Tristin’s face. He sniffed it and then started lazily licking at it. *Whew.*

Dude, what an incredible chapter! I wasn't expecting you to update this fast and to actually go all the way like this! This one exceeded all expectations. Everything was so sexy: the sitting on lap and boucing on Dennis crotch, the slutty jock, the sneaking around, Jese fully embracing his inner slut, the rimming, all the dirty talk and the incredibly hot sex these two had. Fuck man, you really outdone yourself! This has become one of my favorite stories, and I'm sure I'll go back to it a lot in the future. Now that Jese accepted his cockslut status, I really, really want to see how this will actually play out inside Star World. Although Dennis domination of Jese is already complete, I think at least one aspect of the manipulation shouldn't change, and that is the manipulation inside the game. I hope Dennis will keep playing with Jese and that Jese never finds out about Dennis mod, and with what happened already, Dennis takes things up a notch inside the game to make things even more sexy and "ecchi". I would love to see Jese embracing a full fledge slutty style inside the game, in part due to Dennis mod but in part because himself now identifies as slut, meaning completely slutty and skimpy permanent outfits for Jese (exposing his fat ass and tight hole at all times) and in-game created situations in which Jese and Dennis have to fuck or do naughty stuff to complete missions and quests, with more butt near face moments, rimming, humping, blowjobs, anal sex, etc. It would be incredible if things in the game start getting increasingly sexual, with Jese not only getting fucked by Dennis inside the game but actually having to put out for other NPC's or even players as well, with Dennis controlling all the strings, obviously. It will be incredible hot if this happens with Jese not actually knowing or realizing it's because of the mod, so maybe he rationalizes this weird changes due to his new self. Now that they finally did it in real life, I'm mostly interested in seeing this all playing out inside the game in a new arch, because in the game everything is possible. As always, these are just suggestions. I can't wait to read more from you, my friend. Outstanding job! Cheers!

Awe that was cute! In a slightly twisted way...

The issue is that Dennis isn't that powerful as an actual hypnotist relative to the story. And while he knows the craft quite well, he still needs work. He can hypnotize some people in the right setting, but to get someone covertly? Difficult for him still. Thankfully in this technological world, he has mastered his selected craft. Coding, and hacking. Thanks to that, he can still live the dream of being a master hypnotizer and manipulator. Indirectly, but directly. The lap thing is one of those things that sneak up on you (me as Jese in this scenario). Was just writing and thought "it would be really hot if I stumbled into his lap. That would make me feel really submissive if it happened to me." I remember meeting some guy on grindr. Kind of rushed into things. He striped down and got comfy on his couch, cock up in the air. My slut mind was immediately like "get in this top's lap". I did, I got very comfortable, and it was amazing. When you sit in someone's lap, you just are theres, ya know?

Oooh maybe Michael and his bros can ask Dan for help in creating a website they can better show themselves off on. hehe A website that Dan can design it so he gets like 10% of everything made by each of their male members. hehe

Well, my easy answer is that Dan finds himself going down a rabbit hole. He gets Brad because Brad is trying to control Michael. He gets their other friends cause they notice something is going on and Dan needs to make sure his actions don't get revealed. They probably would have little issue with watching some porn given to them by their bro Brad - especially if it has some hot bitches and hoes. hehe What can I say, I am a harem lover. I love the idea of a master having a stable of boys who serve him. And yes, I consider these masculine macho men 'boys' when it comes to this. hehe I actually like younger brothers taking charge and sexually dominating older brothers. (The fact that I am an only child makes this a fascinating thing to like, lol) The only issue here is that I actually liked how you represented Brad and so I am good with him being the top and such. The fact is he didn't really seem that homophobic, more doing it because it was expected. Like when Michael was all like 'fag this and fag that' Brad just made comments about it is what it is and one gotta do what benefits them the most. He seems very logical. Plus, as I said, it was totally hot reading him give commands to Michael, commands that were followed out. -- I really like how the family so far are oblivious to the changes. How things seem normal and natural to them all. How they take what they expected certain things mean and turn it to their new world. Like Bob thinks Bitches do certain thing, and as he is a Bitch for Dan he should do certain things to. Michael things Fags do certain things, and as he becomes more a 'fag' the more he will do certain things to - like happily submit to men for cock and such. (Like I said I think Dan needs to separate Gay and Fag in Michael's mind, one is dominant and one is the subby needy cock sucking and being fucked slut). Maybe the other brother can be 'Boy' or 'Pet' or some other one word thing and because of that he begins to act a certain way.

I loved it, as I always say, big men as victims of smaller one (or younger) are the best <3