The issue is that Dennis isn't that powerful as an actual hypnotist relative to the story. And while he knows the craft quite well, he still needs work. He can hypnotize some people in the right setting, but to get someone covertly? Difficult for him still. Thankfully in this technological world, he has mastered his selected craft. Coding, and hacking. Thanks to that, he can still live the dream of being a master hypnotizer and manipulator. Indirectly, but directly. The lap thing is one of those things that sneak up on you (me as Jese in this scenario). Was just writing and thought "it would be really hot if I stumbled into his lap. That would make me feel really submissive if it happened to me." I remember meeting some guy on grindr. Kind of rushed into things. He striped down and got comfy on his couch, cock up in the air. My slut mind was immediately like "get in this top's lap". I did, I got very comfortable, and it was amazing. When you sit in someone's lap, you just are theres, ya know?

Oooh maybe Michael and his bros can ask Dan for help in creating a website they can better show themselves off on. hehe A website that Dan can design it so he gets like 10% of everything made by each of their male members. hehe

Well, my easy answer is that Dan finds himself going down a rabbit hole. He gets Brad because Brad is trying to control Michael. He gets their other friends cause they notice something is going on and Dan needs to make sure his actions don't get revealed. They probably would have little issue with watching some porn given to them by their bro Brad - especially if it has some hot bitches and hoes. hehe What can I say, I am a harem lover. I love the idea of a master having a stable of boys who serve him. And yes, I consider these masculine macho men 'boys' when it comes to this. hehe I actually like younger brothers taking charge and sexually dominating older brothers. (The fact that I am an only child makes this a fascinating thing to like, lol) The only issue here is that I actually liked how you represented Brad and so I am good with him being the top and such. The fact is he didn't really seem that homophobic, more doing it because it was expected. Like when Michael was all like 'fag this and fag that' Brad just made comments about it is what it is and one gotta do what benefits them the most. He seems very logical. Plus, as I said, it was totally hot reading him give commands to Michael, commands that were followed out. -- I really like how the family so far are oblivious to the changes. How things seem normal and natural to them all. How they take what they expected certain things mean and turn it to their new world. Like Bob thinks Bitches do certain thing, and as he is a Bitch for Dan he should do certain things to. Michael things Fags do certain things, and as he becomes more a 'fag' the more he will do certain things to - like happily submit to men for cock and such. (Like I said I think Dan needs to separate Gay and Fag in Michael's mind, one is dominant and one is the subby needy cock sucking and being fucked slut). Maybe the other brother can be 'Boy' or 'Pet' or some other one word thing and because of that he begins to act a certain way.

I loved it, as I always say, big men as victims of smaller one (or younger) are the best <3

really enjoying it so far! Love the way you're creating tension

@Heru Kane. Michael having a cam partner sounds fun. But what would their other bros think about it? What would happen if Brad's younger brother found out and used that info in his benefit? It’s a fun situation for a side story ;) @BobbyBlobfish. Yes, it's kinda funny how the Summers are oblivious of the changes. He had already a figurative leash on him! (maybe a literal leash later). About the image, it would bother you that I would keep adding images to the next chapters? I haven't made up my mind yet, so I would like to hear the opinion of someone who doesn't like "Michael". @NZController. I'm glad you liked "Michael". Before I show you my vision of Bob (if I ever do) I would like to know how you imagine him or who you would cast for his role in a porn version of the story. @Udems. I see you're a practical person! It would be a shame to waste such a hot jock! All his body needs to be used ;)

So I have to say I did not realize how, well, arousing the whole having someone sit on my lap and bounce like a good boy concept was till I read this and that scene sort of killed me, in all sorts of good ways. The same with the whole having someone sit in front of me bouncing up against my crotch as the mount moves. (Obviously I am Dennis in this scenario, lol). So yeah, this story called to me particularly hard. That and how submissive and wanton Jese got, ooh boy was that hot. So, honestly, and I doubt you would go this way, but I totally see Dennis finding a way to make Colin his as well. Though maybe in such a way that Jese never realizes that his brother is also controlled. hehe

Sorry but I strongly disagree with Hypnothrill imo. I found your long submission thrilling and refreshing. Sometimes a good hypnosis conversion needs some length and detail to it. It is beautifully written and I do not usually read stories where the 1st person victim. U and swizzington are doing good work lol

Thank you thank you~ One of my favorite things about writing these stories is describing my fall to the baddies. It works to different effect with different styles, but for the most part it works out. Glad you enjoy that part as well. I think that is why I tend to enjoy first person style, despite 3rd person being the norm. Yeah, Colin is definitely a bomb to consider. He is less of a threat in terms of the online stuff, since Colin doesn't really game so he probably wouldn't ever discover the manipulation directly. I'd imagine he would have to catch the two in the act, in real life, or half-and-half (if Dennis tried sneaking into his room mid session again). Could be something to explore down the road, or maybe its just a nice way to keep Jese on his toes. That desire of needing to make sure his brother doesn't find out, but still getting cock. Jese probably won't go out of his way to risk it for the biscuit, but the world is a big place. Once Jese figures out what he wants, he will realize what to do. Although Dennis will probably still force him to risk during his next drunk sleepover.

I meant that only those 2 can make wishes or the whole school can?