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10/27/20, 9:26 PM
will the wishes be restricted by just those two or will it affect the whole school?
10/27/20, 9:12 PM
Very excited to see where this goes!
10/27/20, 9:03 PM
Love the power reversal! (and the inclusion of feet)
10/27/20, 8:58 PM
Yeah, the part of me that played Dennis definitely made the Jese part of me quiver when I got pulled into his lap. But thanks for the very kind compliments! Glad you enjoy my writing, and hopefully I will have many more stories to share. Working on a special story for a friend, and then I think right back into a new arc of Star World. Might dance with the writing competition halloween thing. @Heru. Thanks as always for the kind words. Sounds like I got you with this one. And I got myself too. I enjoy sex, but I really felt like I got into it a lot this chapter.
10/27/20, 7:57 PM
I cant even. Everything you write is just pure gold, how do you do it?! I wish there were words to describe how much i love your work but there aren't. this was another amazing chapter to another amazing series Please never stop writing! And i dont blame you for falling in love with Dennis a bit, wish there was a man like him in my life lol. with sex that hot id marry him haha
10/27/20, 7:40 PM
Great story! I loved it so much specially since I can relate with Vicente (not only for his motivations but as a latino too). I found hot that finally a latino is in charge. Im excited to see what comes next!
10/27/20, 6:38 PM
Michael looks Hot! can't wait to see him get taken down a peg or 2. Would also like to see what Bob looks like :D
10/27/20, 6:14 PM
The very best story I've read in months !!! Love the age regression & the new inferiority the older bro. is feeling..Hope you can increase this in the next chapter...
10/27/20, 5:20 PM
I get that, Hypnothrill. This is the second-longest submission I have here on the site (beat out only by Chapter 10 of Web of Trust). Logically, this story just divided well into four parts, but that does mean that the intro part, especially, is quite long. Chapter 2 is only 2/3 the size of this one and is close to its final draft. Chapter 3 is slightly shorter than that, even, but it's still in first draft and definitely needs some work. Typically for me, that means it'll get longer, but I doubt it'll come anywhere close to the length of this one. As for where it's headed, well, let's just say that Moose, the commenter above you, is in the right ballpark. :)
10/27/20, 4:46 PM
I chuckled when Michael was like "no leash on me". Brad is becoming an interesting character while still being off-screen. The idea of other people taking control is really interesting. I like images, but this one isn't too much my taste. Honestly I'm rather neutral. For the suggestions, Bob learning to love and becoming okay with his though on Michael are a given, but I don't really think what the third would be. As for Michael, becoming interested by attention no matter where it comes from, wanting to do anything to help his family and either starting to care about Dan or wanting to spread the videos.