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10/28/20, 1:06 AM
@Heru Kane. Michael having a cam partner sounds fun. But what would their other bros think about it? What would happen if Brad's younger brother found out and used that info in his benefit? It’s a fun situation for a side story ;) @BobbyBlobfish. Yes, it's kinda funny how the Summers are oblivious of the changes. He had already a figurative leash on him! (maybe a literal leash later). About the image, it would bother you that I would keep adding images to the next chapters? I haven't made up my mind yet, so I would like to hear the opinion of someone who doesn't like "Michael". @NZController. I'm glad you liked "Michael". Before I show you my vision of Bob (if I ever do) I would like to know how you imagine him or who you would cast for his role in a porn version of the story. @Udems. I see you're a practical person! It would be a shame to waste such a hot jock! All his body needs to be used ;)
10/28/20, 12:38 AM
So I have to say I did not realize how, well, arousing the whole having someone sit on my lap and bounce like a good boy concept was till I read this and that scene sort of killed me, in all sorts of good ways. The same with the whole having someone sit in front of me bouncing up against my crotch as the mount moves. (Obviously I am Dennis in this scenario, lol). So yeah, this story called to me particularly hard. That and how submissive and wanton Jese got, ooh boy was that hot. So, honestly, and I doubt you would go this way, but I totally see Dennis finding a way to make Colin his as well. Though maybe in such a way that Jese never realizes that his brother is also controlled. hehe
10/28/20, 12:34 AM
Sorry but I strongly disagree with Hypnothrill imo. I found your long submission thrilling and refreshing. Sometimes a good hypnosis conversion needs some length and detail to it. It is beautifully written and I do not usually read stories where the 1st person victim. U and swizzington are doing good work lol
10/27/20, 11:50 PM
Thank you thank you~ One of my favorite things about writing these stories is describing my fall to the baddies. It works to different effect with different styles, but for the most part it works out. Glad you enjoy that part as well. I think that is why I tend to enjoy first person style, despite 3rd person being the norm. Yeah, Colin is definitely a bomb to consider. He is less of a threat in terms of the online stuff, since Colin doesn't really game so he probably wouldn't ever discover the manipulation directly. I'd imagine he would have to catch the two in the act, in real life, or half-and-half (if Dennis tried sneaking into his room mid session again). Could be something to explore down the road, or maybe its just a nice way to keep Jese on his toes. That desire of needing to make sure his brother doesn't find out, but still getting cock. Jese probably won't go out of his way to risk it for the biscuit, but the world is a big place. Once Jese figures out what he wants, he will realize what to do. Although Dennis will probably still force him to risk during his next drunk sleepover.
10/27/20, 11:49 PM
I meant that only those 2 can make wishes or the whole school can?
nycboot
10/27/20, 11:26 PM
Damn this story has turned out to be amazing. One of my favorite characteristics in these stories is watching the "victim" struggle and deal with his new identity and your writing covers that in spades! I love it. I'm just wondering: if Colin finds out that Dennis influenced his younger brother, he might be furious with Dennis. So Jese need not be so fearful.
Drake Nightstrom
10/27/20, 10:17 PM
Oh, Darkblade2814. How do you know it hasn't affected the whole school? I guess only time will tell. *wink*
10/27/20, 9:28 PM
I think he will, in the end for the sake of getting the money for his alpha Dan. He would sell every part of his body there, like his ass, his feet, just for the sake to get the most of money he can ;)
10/27/20, 9:26 PM
will the wishes be restricted by just those two or will it affect the whole school?
10/27/20, 9:12 PM
Very excited to see where this goes!