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10/24/20, 1:28 AM
Four beds huh? Sounds like there's room for a wild card. Can't wait.
10/24/20, 1:03 AM
> I think of the Deputy more as “Frankenstein’s Monster” than anything else at this point. When he comes to life, will his power be containable? The Sheriff seems to think so… the comments are really a big spoiler in kind of way, underline the different between the old and young. about the sheriff the ambitions can destroy but a good "villain" always has a plan B over his hands (maybe Survival of the fittest).
Thiago
10/24/20, 12:05 AM
I live to serve the virus
Server virus
10/24/20, 12:04 AM
I live to serve the virus
10/23/20, 11:59 PM
I like this low key transistion. Lenoldi and the Coach, then to Snake and my dear Rugby Boy, only to be followed by the soldiers, and then....her. My heart sank. But it was so good. Do I trust her? At this point, I do. I didn't think I'd ever be interested in seeing her again, but now I look forward to seeing her again (and those are rare words in my life) On the flip side, I didn't like the feminization of the soldiers: "honey," throwing a kiss, sashay. Every other character seems to be growing in his masculinity (even Tully lol) and that just didn't fit.
Anonymous
10/23/20, 11:50 PM
Yes, you're confusing words like their/there, affect/effect and wear/where. The grammar checker is usually needed to pick up those cases of homophone confusion.
10/23/20, 11:30 PM
> It’s also rare that I go for the happy ending, which can anger the audience, as well. I’m very curious about what kind of love I’m gonna get when all is said and done with Book Two. When I discovered the David DeCocteau Brotherhood series, I was disappointed to discover that the hero never joins the villains, because I always thought the idea of him joining him would be more interesting and sexier. Having good always prevail felt like a betrayal of horror and queer horror in general. Plus I think it has to do with my dominant and submissive sides enjoying a description of an irreversible act of submission So I, for one, will probably be quite happy with the results.
10/23/20, 10:56 PM
yeah, continue!
10/23/20, 10:02 PM
nice start to the story cant wait to read next part... hope it'll b juicy & worth it
10/23/20, 10:00 PM
> Catering to the audience. And that’s fine… but I’ve always found erotic horror to have a little bit more meat to it > First of all, for the phrase "It’s an eroticized thanatos" you win the internet today! Congratulations! You said it so much better than I ever could -- I just write scary, but oddly erotic stories when I get high, man. I'm with you on erotic horror, tho. Many of my stories have some sort of sinister overtones that add a level of creepiness to the proceedings. It's also rare that I go for the happy ending, which can anger the audience, as well. I'm very curious about what kind of love I'm gonna get when all is said and done with Book Two. I think "horror" endings stay with a reader more than "happy" endings do. However, when people make emotional investments in characters and then those characters don't get the ending the reader wants and the reader FREAKS OUT!?! That's when I feel I've succeeded the most.