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10/23/20, 10:00 PM
> Catering to the audience. And that’s fine… but I’ve always found erotic horror to have a little bit more meat to it > First of all, for the phrase "It’s an eroticized thanatos" you win the internet today! Congratulations! You said it so much better than I ever could -- I just write scary, but oddly erotic stories when I get high, man. I'm with you on erotic horror, tho. Many of my stories have some sort of sinister overtones that add a level of creepiness to the proceedings. It's also rare that I go for the happy ending, which can anger the audience, as well. I'm very curious about what kind of love I'm gonna get when all is said and done with Book Two. I think "horror" endings stay with a reader more than "happy" endings do. However, when people make emotional investments in characters and then those characters don't get the ending the reader wants and the reader FREAKS OUT!?! That's when I feel I've succeeded the most.
10/23/20, 9:44 PM
> ... they suddenly find themselves in a horror movie. It's a great twist. So often, erotica that features mind-control and loss of identity themes only focuses on them as fetishes because, well, people who read that kind of erotica tend to view them as fetishes. Catering to the audience. And that's fine... but I've always found erotic horror to have a little bit more meat to it: you're forced to confront how terrifying the thing you are secretly attracted to is, even as you long to experience it. It's like seeing the bones and shipwrecks strewn on the sirens' rocks, even as you steer your ship towards them. It's an eroticized *thanatos*, a simultaneous fear of and desire for that which we know will harm us. To lose one's sense of self, to die as the body lives on, an anonymous unit in a sea of drones... even as we recoil at the thought, some of us feel an awful longing for the liberation of obliteration.
10/23/20, 9:11 PM
Aw that was really sweet and hot. This was fantastic! :)
10/23/20, 8:40 PM
> The farming scene reminded me of a similar scene .... I got flashbacks to reading that scene as I read the opening episode. You took me to a good place with that. > Okay, that's super cool. The "seeding the field" image has been a large part of this story's make-up -- there've been dreams about it going all the way back to the early chapters of Book One. So it was really important for me that once we got to the actual, physical moment they discover that it was nothing like they thought it would be. I wanted the characters to have these kind of rapturous feelings associated with the farm so that when they find out what it really is and what it's going to do to them, they suddenly find themselves in a horror movie. But the best line of the chapter goes to Rugby Boy when he says, "“C’est la partie du film où quelque chose d’effrayant se produit.” *This is the part of the movie where something scary happens.
Anonymous
10/23/20, 8:16 PM
I keep coming back to this story, it's so amazing - thank you for writing it!
10/23/20, 8:13 PM
Another enjoyable chapter, but I had to give the army guys a side eye about leaving Devin behind. I was like, "Dude, you guys are still army; where's the whole 'no man left behind' attitude?" Glad the Lieutenant got things straightened out. Sheriff Lane selling out Kansas was rather enjoyable; just when he was going to receive another visit from Tully, he sicks her on Kansas. The farming scene reminded me of a similar scene in one of my favorite novels. In Robert McCammon's *They Thirst*, there's a scene in it where a former coffin maker is turned into a vampire and working on an assembly line. I got flashbacks to reading that scene as I read the opening episode. You took me to a good place with that.
Anonymous
10/23/20, 7:55 PM
Cool idea. The build-up was good, but I would have preferred more showing of what happened to the guys and less dialogue explicitly telling what happened.
10/23/20, 6:50 PM
Love the rimming. Really hot. I hope they get to act normal outside the house. You know going to class, attending sports, hanging out. But when they go home they are good boys for master.
10/23/20, 5:20 PM
Ohhh, that wasn't expected! Some resistance. Once Chris is around, I wonder if we'll get slice of life events?
Oct 11, 2020
10/23/20, 5:09 PM
Very hot.