Curious about the mating chapter. It's nice that Dave will take revenge, but Nate had better keep him under control.

Really hot! loved the barber part. Can totally imagine how he must feel!🤤

@DerekWilliams i gotta add my 2 cents. your writing has always been good, but this story is a big leap forward. one of this story's strongest points is the transformations are only hinted at, so the readers' imaginations can fill in the details. in the context of the story, this sentence: "It wasn’t long before he got on his knees between my thick quads" is one of the hottest things I've ever read

hot as hell dude, please continue!

Yeah, definitely get to cheat the rules. Growing up I loved to play in my own made up world so I could shift the science in my favor. I don't blame you for thinking certain things, and I probably could have made reference to saving the mounts being more about the time and resources to resummon, than permanence. Them being in a virtual hacked world, in the future, definitely lets us makes crazy assumptions and rules.

You might not have typos, but you definitely have wrong words. For instance "if we don't get scene" should be "if we don't get seen". These are what Prog Prince is referencing

keep this going. good start

Oooh right, its a game, so of course he can resummon the mount. lol. I got so focused on things being realistic I forgot it was a game in that moment. Which is funny because I totally focused on it being a game in both how easy he took cock and also the whole loosing conciousness when he was squeezed by the neck. hehe --- So, as a random thing that has no bearing on this story, I was reading an article about a sex cult and it just randomly gave me an idea of Jese getting an email from his friend where the friend begs for help escaping from a cult and Jese rides to the rescue ... only to get tranced and subjugated and made into a good boy and co-slut with his friend for the cult owner. hehe

@Heru Kane Thanks for the additional comments! I guess Dennis wasn't really the person to consider saving the mount. Either he didn't care, or didn't have a plan. The mount side quest was a surprise for him as well (just sort went with it instead of ending the chapter there). Fortunately!! The mount could resummoned, it just makes more sense to not lose it in the first place. Progress and resources, that kind of reason. I'm not going full blown ecchi manga with the flow of the actions, so trying to keep it a little more realistic. Dennis doesn't want to push his limits, so he is being careful. He thinks Jese will keep playing Star World which will always provide more opportunities. And considering Jese is still working on his modded quest line, he probably has the fool hooked. He doesn't need to make any drastic moves, knowing that Jese will be subjected to his mods again. I decided to bring the smith back just as a fun way to tie the mist back into the story. It was something that could make sense. “Which means, this cute ass of yours… loves to get filled up with a nice, long, fat, cock…” Was indeed a very mind melting line, I'm glad you reminded me of it... @_@ Dennis definitely wouldn't be the kind to submit. He can pretty much god mode (can 100% godmode), just needs to be careful. If the dragon spotted both of them, he might have needed to play along for a little, or could very possibly have been caught to a point where he would have missed the chance to save himself. Fortunately he is very wise to the Ai of his mod. But, maybe he made it too good? You never know... That being said, Trav and Dennis definitely had a fun conversation on the ride home about having sex, in which Dennis had to remind the dragonborn that he still wasn't going to bottom for him. Maybe they even discussed a sexy purple mist party threesome though... That would be fun... @_@ <3

Firstly, in response to your comment. I honestly don't care much about Azir funny enough. I liked the two others, I think they would be fun, but I really prefer only Dennis taking on the role of super dominant top over Jese and so an NPC doing that frustrates me. That said I do like what came of it in this chapter. Okay so complete commentry. As I said, I like Dennis now directly participating in the events. But I also like the interplay between Dennis being there and not being there and how both elements are used together to great effect. I like the dragon smith using an aphrodesiac, what a nice method of getting Jese to relax and not see anything really wrong with what is going on. I also like the smith playing with Jese's bottom, so sexy. Said smith referring to the naga is very interesting and also sexy. I especially like the line "Which means, thsi cute ass of yours... loves to get filled up with a nice, long, fat, cock..." So sexy. Loved the rimming. Nice act, that and the words the smith used, very hot. The fucking was great as well. I liked how Jese was a good boy, taking it slowly and steadily. Then loosing his mind as the dragon took what was his. So that was awesome. I especially loving him loosing it, zoning out. The scenes between Dennis and Jese was glorious. I like the manipulations, I love the coaching, the urging on. The pushing but then the backing off. I also really like, just like it looks like they are about to split up, the whole quest about the mount going off. Soo cool. I do wish there was more hanky panky while riding on the mount, maybe a bit of butt rub or accidental butt in face or something. hehe The dragon stuff was very interesting. Well mostly that is. I liked the submission of Jese. While I am very very glad you did not even attempt to make Dennis submit (so glad on that) I am kind of sad that Dennis didn't actually get to take a sort of dominant position either against Jese or that dragon. The smith coming to the rescue was interesting. I wish it had been Dennis somehow but the smith was a nice system event point. I am sad about Jese's mount actually, especially as it was from the regular game. I really do wish Dennis had managed to save him. In fact, this bothers me. Cause Dennis saving the mount would have given him an even bigger inroad into supporting Jese. So yeah, good mega chapter. Love the comments and the sex and the rimming. Love the submission. Loved Dennis taking control and commenting on about a dude from the past (true or not doesn't matter, the story makes Jese listen). I do wish there was more Dennis on Jese actions, especially when Jese was a bit out of it. Like maybe if Jese had put on the bottoms and such and Dennis looked at them and his butt. Or while they were hiding from the dragon Dennis was able to grope Jese a bit, maybe in an attempt to keep him from going towards the dragon. And yeah, I wish the mount was saved. All in all very good. Sexy. Lots of fun. Love the game system.