Recent Comments

10/22/20, 5:12 AM
This is a delight! I’m very excited to see where it goes!
10/22/20, 3:22 AM
amazing story. SERIOUSLY hot but please ask someone to proof read it before posting?
10/22/20, 1:45 AM
Curious about the mating chapter. It's nice that Dave will take revenge, but Nate had better keep him under control.
jamiemboy
10/22/20, 1:05 AM
Really hot! loved the barber part. Can totally imagine how he must feel!🤤
10/22/20, 12:07 AM
@DerekWilliams i gotta add my 2 cents. your writing has always been good, but this story is a big leap forward. one of this story's strongest points is the transformations are only hinted at, so the readers' imaginations can fill in the details. in the context of the story, this sentence: "It wasn’t long before he got on his knees between my thick quads" is one of the hottest things I've ever read
Grey
10/21/20, 10:27 PM
hot as hell dude, please continue!
10/21/20, 8:47 PM
Yeah, definitely get to cheat the rules. Growing up I loved to play in my own made up world so I could shift the science in my favor. I don't blame you for thinking certain things, and I probably could have made reference to saving the mounts being more about the time and resources to resummon, than permanence. Them being in a virtual hacked world, in the future, definitely lets us makes crazy assumptions and rules.
10/21/20, 8:38 PM
You might not have typos, but you definitely have wrong words. For instance "if we don't get scene" should be "if we don't get seen". These are what Prog Prince is referencing
Anonymous
10/21/20, 8:34 PM
keep this going. good start
10/21/20, 8:32 PM
Oooh right, its a game, so of course he can resummon the mount. lol. I got so focused on things being realistic I forgot it was a game in that moment. Which is funny because I totally focused on it being a game in both how easy he took cock and also the whole loosing conciousness when he was squeezed by the neck. hehe --- So, as a random thing that has no bearing on this story, I was reading an article about a sex cult and it just randomly gave me an idea of Jese getting an email from his friend where the friend begs for help escaping from a cult and Jese rides to the rescue ... only to get tranced and subjugated and made into a good boy and co-slut with his friend for the cult owner. hehe