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10/21/20, 3:18 AM
Excited for more.
10/21/20, 2:42 AM
@Derek Williams: I look forward to seeing what you can do with dumbing down yet autonomous story.
10/21/20, 1:07 AM
Hot start! I'm looking forward to the next part.
10/20/20, 11:49 PM
I enjoyed your concept of "nothing" and how you brought it about. Then shooting away their very selves. And then All conquers nothing. Well done. (the kamikaze driver was a bit dark)
10/20/20, 10:56 PM
Well. I loved it. It was a perfect amount of struggle on the part of the victim. And the illustration of exactly how powerful and conniving Mark actually was in that moment, when he pinned him and started go to ham was well done. It felt genuine that Todd barely could keep struggling in the face of that much determination because even I was like, "Damn dude you really pulled this off, you got me." It also felt like Mark had some genuine motivations and justification, though unfortunately now that he's like 13", it feels like his personality has been distorted into a somewhat cruel level. I don't think 9" Mark was planning to make Todd a pass-around-sub, I think Mark just wanted someone for himself. But it's entirely consistent with the writing that he's distorted himself in the process of trying to capture Todd. Though, at 9" Mark wouldn't have really scared most guys off but now he is genuinely freakish. And he may think he'll be the star of a sex party; maybe he will. But I think that crowing about a 13" cock being popular is more the mental distortion talking. I think he's going to scare off guys unless they're already extremely submissive and into extreme assplay. So if he gets bored and wants to rail someone other than Todd? He might have to give up a couple inches to someone else "temporarily". It would be interesting if that provides a chance for Todd to escape or at least get back to normal. Probably not. ;)
10/20/20, 10:49 PM
Thank you. More to cum 😅
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10/20/20, 10:05 PM
Have to say I wasn’t a huge fan of the intro - dealing with the grief of a dead loved one isn’t really a turn on. But once you got into the meat of the story I found myself really enjoying things and you did a great job of framing things in the historical setting
10/20/20, 9:45 PM
Please keep going! Off to a really great start.
10/20/20, 8:57 PM
this was so HOT!!
10/20/20, 8:26 PM
amazing start! can't wait to read more!