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10/20/20, 8:57 PM
this was so HOT!!
10/20/20, 8:26 PM
amazing start! can't wait to read more!
10/20/20, 7:48 PM
Keep going
10/20/20, 7:27 PM
great
10/20/20, 6:11 PM
My fantasy is almost this. Difference is I am having coffee and the man joins me uninvited at the table.
10/20/20, 3:52 PM
@New Guy In Town - Thanks! The use of the word 'metaphor' in this story was a bit of a stab at the faux intellectualism that can surround literary criticism, and yeah, it was intentionally misused. It sounds like a fun challenge to try and write a dumbing down story where the subject keeps autonomy and control... I'll put that in the idea folder. As for your idea folder, your meta story sounds fun. I hope you write it! @MonsterMash62 - Extreme Changeover where I learned what I call 'transformation in stages'. It's not just one moment, but a whole set of steps that lets us explore how the character feels as each aspect of themselves is changed. It's had a tremendous impact on my writing, and that's why I picked it to include. Plus it's damn hot. I sort of pair it with this picture in my head: http://musclejocks.blogspot.com/2009/07/muscle-jocks-of-day.html?m=1 @SubMuscleGuy - Thanks! As soon as I thought "What if there was a class that dissected dumbing down and it brought you along for the ride" I couldn't help but write it. There are so many great stories under the 'dumber' tag that it was hard to pick just a few. @MeddlerIncs - Thanks! I feel like I'm standing on the shoulders of giants with this one. @JockPupTraxxx - Aw, thanks man. I love when people like my work enough to comment on it. I'm basically a slut for praise, without the comments I doubt I'd write.
10/20/20, 2:49 PM
another great story as usual
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10/20/20, 2:47 PM
Amazing start to the story! Looking forward to more
10/20/20, 2:47 PM
I really liked the pace of the story. I got to know the characters well enough. Please continue
10/20/20, 2:45 PM
Fantastic story, DW. And the reference material is the stuff of legend as well. Really well written.