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10/20/20, 2:49 PM
another great story as usual
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10/20/20, 2:47 PM
Amazing start to the story! Looking forward to more
10/20/20, 2:47 PM
I really liked the pace of the story. I got to know the characters well enough. Please continue
10/20/20, 2:45 PM
Fantastic story, DW. And the reference material is the stuff of legend as well. Really well written.
10/20/20, 2:20 PM
I’d like to read more. This was a hot beginning!
10/20/20, 2:09 PM
i would love to see a role reversal of the nerd being the bigger jock/top/dom country trucker in their relationship post hypnosis and tf.
10/20/20, 12:45 PM
need more of Bob being the bottom bitch of the family. He is the alpha of the house before I would love him to be the lowest in the family. Thank you for being an awesome writer!
10/20/20, 12:06 PM
All that fun and no guilt I'm in , lol
10/20/20, 11:44 AM
Ooo new reading materials! Mimbo drops I've read before and fell in love with it, so it'll be good to have more stories to add to my list! Speaking of, yours was really well written, and it was wonderful to see the gradual transformation of them both. Kudos to you! =]
10/20/20, 7:57 AM
This story has so many elements that I really love, including underwear fetish and serial recruitment. But I feel like it's missing one very important ingredient that would make it sizzling hot: conflict, No one's offering any resistance to the Revive shorts, no one seems reluctant to try them on, and no one seems remotely distressed that they've suddenly turned gay. Heck, there's not even any conflict between the various Revive-controlled teams in the tournament, as the protagonists get picked in advance to win. If you write a third chapter to this--and I hope you do--I'd love to see you introduce a character, maybe a coach or father, who gets suspicious of Revive and actually puts up a fight.