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10/19/20, 8:14 PM
@Erratic101. It took some chapters but finally Bob is finding his place. I'm glad that you like it. @BobbyBlobfish. I'm aware that there's plenty of ways to know who are the authors of the challenge but I do what I can to promote those stories. Also it's fun to avoid spoilers. About Dan help, there's a lot of ways he could change Bob. Like you said, he can take his shame away, or make him forget that Michael is his son, turn him into a mindless sexslave or simple fix his suggestion to only love sucking Dan's cock. The possibilities are endless. @Heru Kane. I don't think that Dan would like to share his Alpha status with someone like Michael, so I don't think it will be a problem. The best part of read and write about assholes it's that when they are "punished" it's so satisfying and you can go further without feeling guilty. As always I enjoy your comments.
10/19/20, 8:01 PM
I expected this to just be a gimmick story, but it turned out to be a delightful - and very hot - original contribution to the genre it's commenting on.
10/19/20, 7:53 PM
I totally find Bob's interest in his son to be hot. I find his need to suck cock to be great. Buuut I do not find him thinking that Michael is an alpha to be fun, so I hope Dan puts a stop to that. Maybe have Bob stopping finding it shameful, maybe building it up so he thinks its sexy and fun to suck and fuck his sons but not because they are alphas or anything. I also like the start of the changes in Michael. Him finding it 'feeling good to obey orders' was great. Him being unable to put a link between Dan and the 'fag' was also cool. I think maybe in time have his logic twist so that he is the 'fag' in his mind could be fun. Maybe like how Bob is all like 'bitches act a certain way, I am a bitch to Dan, thus when I am with him I should act like that' Michael can be like 'fags act a certain way, I am a fag, then when I am with Dan or x I must act that way'. and such. I admit the more negative you present his mindset the more happy I am to see him being taken down. Not in a painful life ruining way but more in a way that he becomes happy and blissful and subby and needy and a muscle slut for men say online or at the job.
10/19/20, 7:46 PM
Well, if you click on an author pages, you see everything they wrote, including the *author hidden* ones, so too late for me to guess. But I guess it is pretty easy to figures anyway. Really clear if you know. Bob new interest made me laugh, especially when Michael mentioned he would have liked a mouth to suck him. I expect Dan to help Bob by taking away his shame and making Michael interested. Michael will probably realize there all fags and that it's okay. Or maybe it's just me being very happy-minded =) I'm just waiting for those revelations. Michael is gonna have a blue screen. Hope the family has a new form of normality and are all happy together, but the end won't be here before a while.
10/19/20, 7:41 PM
I'm a white, english born male so I doubt it could be classed as 'Anglophobic'.
10/19/20, 7:05 PM
yehey! im so happy with what you did with Bob!!
10/19/20, 6:39 PM
have him slowly start to turn into his 1950s housewife
10/19/20, 6:31 PM
extremely well written! i truly enjoyed reading every part. unfortunately, i was unable to read the last chapter due to "safety mode." this probably where the body swap happens.
10/19/20, 6:02 PM
About damn time my work got into a college syllabus!
10/19/20, 5:55 PM
As one of the people who wrote on the Dumbing Down post, this is AMAZING! You do it just right. :) What a lovely trip down memory lane! Thanks for always writing such amazing stories!