Recent Comments

10/19/20, 7:05 PM
yehey! im so happy with what you did with Bob!!
10/19/20, 6:39 PM
have him slowly start to turn into his 1950s housewife
10/19/20, 6:31 PM
extremely well written! i truly enjoyed reading every part. unfortunately, i was unable to read the last chapter due to "safety mode." this probably where the body swap happens.
10/19/20, 6:02 PM
About damn time my work got into a college syllabus!
10/19/20, 5:55 PM
As one of the people who wrote on the Dumbing Down post, this is AMAZING! You do it just right. :) What a lovely trip down memory lane! Thanks for always writing such amazing stories!
10/19/20, 5:20 PM
One of your best stories yet! I love the subtle shout out to past great stories (Sinners and Saints being one of my favorites). I really enjoyed the sly and subtle changes especially in the narrator. Bravo!
10/19/20, 4:49 PM
Fantastic, really awesome story! I love it! the dumbification is very well done, I like it very much!
10/19/20, 4:48 PM
Plus its a Canadian story, so ❤ 
10/19/20, 4:47 PM
More please. The ending was a bit abrupt (where did the other guys go? What's Revive's plan?) but otherwise I fucking love this story. One of my favorites. So fucking hot and sexy. Finding athletes in their gear so sexy (especially spandex and especially hockey spandex) and having grown up in a hockey town, this story was amazing.
EJG
10/19/20, 4:36 PM
So..Any more to cum..?