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7/6/25, 9:21 PM
Great ending to a story with an open ending. But Harold's story ended at that moment) but is this the end of the story of this universe? This is a big question. I'm interested to know if you would like to try writing a story about how a person from our world ends up in the world of Dr. Grain or another similar one where there is mind control? And in this alternative world, his family, mostly men, are hypnotized and our main character only then accidentally finds out about this and realizes that he ended up in another world (an alternative reality).?
7/6/25, 8:57 PM
Nice! I just hope that some unscrupulous neighbor/ex-con/cop doesn't take advantage of the cop in the future (evil grin)!
7/6/25, 8:27 PM
Really appreciate this series so far. Such a serious and genuine master/ slave relationship. Kam is being genuine in his role and his desire to dominate and mold Taylor. Being demanding, relentless, but not aggressive. He is still taking this in steps. He definitely wants this to continue. Adding the cage and plug was a solid plus. Hopefully Kam doesn't remove them. Maybe he will even add a collar later on. And Taylor has many unresolved personal matters that will shape him. How he needs to recognize that he actually enjoys this. He likes what Kam is doing to him. Just how long will his self denial last?
Drifting Scot
7/6/25, 6:29 AM
Great work, look forward to the next Chapter and tales from the Rubber Rivet!

7/6/25, 8:06 PM
@Drifting Scot Thank you, DS. Not sure if I'll add to this one directly. Now that I've introduced that club, there's a strong temptation to revisit it, perhaps with a new involuntary guest.
Anonymous
7/6/25, 7:33 PM
Great story! Can't wait for more!
7/6/25, 6:40 PM
I've been enjoying your story, however, if I were to name one criticism it would be the overt religiosity in this chapter. Maybe other readers have a different take on it, but that is a turn-off for me. That's just my feelings on it and is not meant to detract from your otherwise excellent and creative story.
7/6/25, 6:05 PM
As you know already...I'm VERY eager for the next chapter. Used re-reading all this to help get me in the mood to write today. You're crazy talented, my friend.
Zander
7/6/25, 4:57 PM
Thank you for the wonderful story and universe. It's a pity that chapters don't come out often.😢
tim
7/6/25, 2:24 PM
a hot amazing opening set up… as the story unfolded it just kept getting hotter and hotter all the way through!!!