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Sexcrab
10/19/20, 2:16 AM
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ParadoxBear
10/19/20, 1:44 AM
If what happened to Murdock after meeting the Great One is anything to go by, I think it's safe to say that any bonded men who meet Him get fully taken over by their symbionts, which in turn get fully enthralled to the Great One's will. Which is to say, most of our cast of characters are essentially dead- erasure of personality is such an erotically twisted trope in mind-control stories. This, of course, raises several questions about the Deputy once he is transformed into a Great One. The obvious implication is that some combination of Lane, Snake, and Rugby Boy will be enthralled to Deputy Great One. I can see Lane's arrogance coming back to bite him in the ass; getting enslaved and erased by the very being he sought to control would be deliciously ironic. Of course, this does raise the question of what happens with Snake and Rugby Boy: the affection between them is so palpable I can see them making it out of this with their individuality intact, but at the same time, I'm expecting the tragically sexy twist of one or both coming under the Deputy's sway. If that is the case, I think Rugby Boy is the more likely of the pair, thus presenting Snake with the cruel choice of having to flee and have to deal with his grief while still resisting, or submit and join his new lover in slavery to the Deputy.
10/19/20, 1:43 AM
Hurry up with the next chapter!
10/19/20, 1:30 AM
The sheriff may end up telling the new great deputy "I submit to muscle". Another Absman classic that can keep me hard.
10/19/20, 12:57 AM
no, that was a hunch I had, you don't have to do anything you don't want, you are the writer after all
Author
10/19/20, 12:55 AM
Is that a challenge? At this point I am running out of steam on it, we'll see.
AgingAthlete
10/19/20, 12:53 AM
Great story, fascinating concept, well-written. Just a tad unbelievable. I'd like to see Jeremy just a bit less of a flamer and more of a cub.
Swizzington
10/18/20, 11:50 PM
I briefly considered entering this into the Halloween challenge but decided it would be too much of a stretch. But fear not, for I have another story in the works, written just for said challenge! Thanks for the feedback. I agree. I didn't do a good enough job signposting the fact that, actually, Dr. Humble had started reprogramming Justice Boy's mind from the very instant their eyes first locked. He had been working away in the background of the poor hero's brain the entire time! When it came to pushing the point home, Justice Boy was already pretty far gone. I intended for this story to be short and simple, and was concerned it might get a bit too 'info-dumpy', if you know what I mean. Especially because I intend on writing another, longer story involving Dr. Humble in future :-)
10/18/20, 11:17 PM
this could have possibly fit to the halloween challenge with the demon's presence, but no complaints here! I ADORE your work, and the only feedback is to somewhat echo Transformheaven and lament we didn't get a a slightly more drawn out subverting with most of our poor super friends. I DID appreciate that from the start Justice Boy was locked in with the eye contact, and totally unsuspecting, but when it came to actively breaking his will, I feel like the editing floor robbed us of some good bits. A more thorough recollection by Mr. Humble about how he got started in the chicken business, his first encounters with Crimson Fist and Wiz Kid and how he came about to the conclusion to make their jizz into his secret sauce by experimenting with the regular workers, and such? Heck, both parties acknowledged that this was going to be a villainous monologue! Humble could have gone to town. In general, I am just happy we got more of your work, but still want more of your work. ha!
10/18/20, 10:33 PM
I bet the the story will end with the dragon taking over the kingdom