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10/17/20, 10:58 PM
I really enjoy the Sheriff's and Snake's "rebellion." Snake calls it resistance but I see more rebellion in the Sheriff, to the point of cumming before the Great One can make him. Excited to see where it leads to. It was a large and dangerous cock......can I steal that one day?
10/17/20, 9:24 PM
> Definitely want to see what type of great one the Deputy will become. Felt a bit sad reading that exchange between him and the Sheriff before the transformation began. > > Excited for the deputies transformation. > The Sheriff seems pretty confident that he can control the Deputy -- but what's that saying? "Power tends to corrupt. But absolute power corrupts absolutely." Yeah, that's the one.... > Absman is keeping me hard all day long just with the thought in the back of my mind. > Success! To me, this is the difference between erotica and a jack-off story. Erotica stays with you, infiltrates your thoughts, corrupts your fantasies. Not that there aren't whack-off moments within the erotic novel, but I think it's the stuff that stays with you that matters more.
10/17/20, 9:06 PM
I hope to see more soon
10/17/20, 8:08 PM
I really really love stories where the city is as much a character as living people. Well done for writing this. And thank you !
10/17/20, 7:34 PM
Excited for the deputies transformation. The load in his ass from earlier in the morning should be doing it's job. Hope the sheriff keeps his tank full while the great flower does it's work. Absman is keeping me hard all day long just with the thought in the back of my mind.
10/17/20, 6:56 PM
Like I said before, I hope to see how the students and teachers are now that their sexuality changed
Moby
10/17/20, 6:06 PM
This was great! It's awlays fun to see a writer try new stuff!
10/17/20, 6:04 PM
At first read, I thought the Staff Sergeant was teasing Devin but you do say he's faking it. So there's still hope Devin will be a familiar to them. Definitely want to see what type of great one the Deputy will become. Felt a bit sad reading that exchange between him and the Sheriff before the transformation began.
10/17/20, 6:02 PM
i so loved this story, please, more.
10/17/20, 5:56 PM
that was amazing. I quite liked the new direction you tried