Recent Comments

10/18/20, 12:07 PM
This story has been amazing. Loved the concept. Loved the description of the changes. Lots of my kinks were hit with this story. Great work! Eagerly awaiting anything else you write.
10/18/20, 11:36 AM
> I really enjoy the Sheriff’s and Snake’s “rebellion.” Snake calls it resistance but I see more rebellion in the Sheriff > Absolutely agree! As a matter of fact, in Chapter 16, you will see just how committed the Sheriff is to this idea. > I can’t really say the Deputy is a bad man, just a loyal one. > I don't think it's the Deputy that's the problem. Imagine you're some kind of Machiavellian Dom Puppetmaster and you "create" a super-powered being who's completely within your control? The weapon's not bad, right? It's just there to be used.
Martin
10/18/20, 10:34 AM
> Anglophobic Racism. 0 How is this anglophobic? And I don't see any (reverse) racism either, just raceplay.
Daydreamer
10/18/20, 8:38 AM
Anglophobic Racism. 0
10/18/20, 7:47 AM
Will they be a sequel? Nice story!
10/18/20, 7:23 AM
i would suggest that you tag for what is in the chapter itself, not what a reader might expect from the series as a whole. Typically with first installments there isn't much action, so readers tend to be a bit understanding when there is a shortage of tags, but there's already such a lovely whipping right here! No problems!
10/18/20, 7:20 AM
can't wait for more.
10/18/20, 6:06 AM
brainwash him into being a muscle buttom slave please. +1 to Bob Alan too!
Author
10/18/20, 5:49 AM
Not an AI story, note "Part 1" (P1), have patience.
Bob Alan
10/18/20, 5:18 AM
would love to see Bruce muscle up more, grow bigger to please his boy, and impress his friends.