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Moby
10/17/20, 6:06 PM
This was great! It's awlays fun to see a writer try new stuff!
10/17/20, 6:04 PM
At first read, I thought the Staff Sergeant was teasing Devin but you do say he's faking it. So there's still hope Devin will be a familiar to them. Definitely want to see what type of great one the Deputy will become. Felt a bit sad reading that exchange between him and the Sheriff before the transformation began.
10/17/20, 6:02 PM
i so loved this story, please, more.
10/17/20, 5:56 PM
that was amazing. I quite liked the new direction you tried
10/17/20, 5:41 PM
i soooo love this story, it's sooo hot. can't wait for more.
10/17/20, 5:36 PM
Any requests? What would you like to see Bruce brainwashed into next?
10/17/20, 4:48 PM
Created an account just to say how much I loved this story!
10/17/20, 3:56 PM
nice story love to see a part 2 maybe
Anonymous
10/17/20, 2:49 PM
Great story, Swizz!
Anonymous
10/17/20, 2:27 PM
wow didnt see you going in that direction swizz but im glad you did!