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10/17/20, 11:17 AM
!!!!! INCREDIBLE! Talk about a swerve, and a great one at that. I love that we see traces of the Swizzington style--men in immaculate suits, resisting hypnosis--in this new, sexy, and amazing story. Wonderful work!
10/17/20, 10:20 AM
> love this story. but would love to read longer chapters at once. > That's the one thing I'm trying to be consistent about between Book One and Book Two: chapter length. John Byrne said it should take as much time to read a comic book as the average crap lasts. I believe that's true of serialized erotica, too. Just long enough to wank.... I love that you're a real reader, but I don't want length to intimidate.... so instead, bite-sized chunks that frequently change POV to maintain interest from the short-attention scan crowd. It might be best for you to wait and read it all at once when it's all published. > maybe a twist that those units drone “break free” and assimilate their creators ? > Something remarkably similar happens in chap 18 which I hope will satisfy this stray thought.
10/17/20, 8:26 AM
Nice one! I would've liked to see the resistance last a little bit longer tho
10/17/20, 8:09 AM
love this story. but would love to read longer chapters at once. and maybe there is a detailed description of creating the drone units from the original storys and maybe a twist that those units drone "breake free" and assimilate their creators ? (just wishful thinking) ;)))
10/17/20, 7:37 AM
Hey, just wanted to say thanks everyone for the support with this. I've got a couple of scenarios thought out for this, but it's a matter of getting the time to write it out. But keep an eye out, there's still more homophobes whose lives will take a turn for the better.
10/17/20, 7:01 AM
@Catalust, thanks! For the names most if the time I just pick random names, the only criteria is they aren't too similar to each other. Helps keep the scenes straight. @Lusty Stallion, thanks for the feedback. It's a concept I've had rattling around for a while, just waiting for Halloween. The toughest part was picking the costumes. And remembering that there needs to be some tops, not everyone gets to be a slutty bottom.
Baple
10/17/20, 3:54 AM
great one! jealous of those supercows honestly!
10/17/20, 3:00 AM
That was amazing!! I'd love to take a trip to that farm
10/17/20, 2:41 AM
I live to serve the
Anonymous
10/17/20, 12:03 AM
great story! wow!