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10/16/20, 5:53 PM
> In the “first season,” there was a big emphasis on straight-to-gay transformation, and those transformation scenes were some of my favorite parts. The “second season” spends more time following characters who are already gay, which doesn’t personally push my arousal buttons in the same way. > I'm sorry it's not the experience you'd like to have, but I couldn't write another 90 thousand words on "and then the same thing happens to Bob." Characters have to have a purpose beyond transforming and turning gay. Otherwise it's "A Thousand Characters in Search of a Plot." The show-runner is different -- I'M different! It's fifteen years later. I'm older, wiser, a better storyteller. Even if I were to follow the same format as Book One, at some point, there would HAVE to be conflict that can't be overcome with "hey, someone left you a flower!" Why write it if it's the same thing over and over again? The Good News is Book One will always be there for you. SPOILERS: Book Three is a gritty, post-apocalyptic boy meets car story.
10/16/20, 5:53 PM
I hope you continue to write this is very good
10/16/20, 5:44 PM
Damn, this story is so good!
10/16/20, 5:34 PM
Finally, everyone's made it to Bowden Farm! Love the image of 200 kneeling men simultaneously ejaculating into the dirt. ' I'm still struck by the ways this "second season" of Pollination: The Series is very different from the first. (If I didn't know better, I'd say it had changed showrunners). In the "first season," there was a big emphasis on straight-to-gay transformation, and those transformation scenes were some of my favorite parts. The "second season" spends more time following characters who are already gay, which doesn't personally push my arousal buttons in the same way. Still, I look forward to reading a new chapter of this story every Friday!
10/16/20, 5:26 PM
Great start, looking forward to more!
Anonymous
10/16/20, 3:51 PM
Great, hot story!! Wish I had Luke's snapchat and a friend like Manny
10/16/20, 3:38 PM
Ok now we're cooking!
10/16/20, 1:58 PM
I loved this story! and I have an inkling who wrote it because I feel like there are a few authors who I gravitate toward when it comes to style, and hypno-themes, so I guess time will tell for the author reveal. I think it was very well written, it was a unique idea to have pandemic be around the time of the Spanish Flu, and i loved the brainwashing mantra component. One of my favorite stories of the challenge!
screamingmoist
10/16/20, 1:36 PM
Thanks! I'm glad people still enjoy this one!
10/16/20, 1:27 PM
> I first pictured rugby boy as Dan Tai. But since he is Canadian maybe Byronful is a better match. > I agree with your first assessment. I think Dan Tai would play a great Rugby Boy (though I'd like Rugby Boy to be hairier -- at least some nice chest hair). Honestly, I could see Rugby Boy being played by the gorgeous Pennsylvania State Rep Brian Sims. I think Byronful (who I follow on IG, too) would be better cast as the Deputy. He's got that lean, clean cut look.