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10/15/20, 3:16 PM
I really thought you'd never come back here. You have no Idea how happy I was when I saw your new entry. I felt like a kid opening a present. Million thanks to you. I also love this one as much as the previous one. I enjoyed it. I hope to see more from you. I will always be a fan. By the way, I noticed that you are into this kind of stories and I have story here (not mine, i didn't write it. but this story is no longer available on the web. Good thing I saved it for my own. Credits to the owner) -- it is one of my favorite stories and I want to share it with you. This might give you an inspiration(maybe?) for your next stories. Is there a way for me to send it to you via email? Again, thank you and stay safe :)
10/15/20, 3:01 PM
This was amazing, probably the best done mind control I've seen on here and used to create a horde of incredible asses. Fuck, I wish I could meet Wes haha
10/15/20, 2:32 PM
more more more continue on!
easdf
10/15/20, 1:38 PM
Awesome story! would love to hear more like this. It would also be hot to read if Josh would have stolen Tim's manhood with intent, but that's my personal taste
10/15/20, 12:24 PM
What I would give to see a picture of the pecs let alone the man that inspired so many fantasies.
10/15/20, 12:06 PM
> I’ve always had the fantasy that when the deputy is finally given his own flower the sheriff impales the deputy with his cock at the very first hit of pollen. And continues to fuck him until the symbiote settles into his balls. The extra load transforms the deputy into something greater than the sheriff. > I was literally in the middle of writing the Deputy's transformation scene when this comment came in! Isn't timing awesome?! "Something greater than the Sheriff...?" Perhaps physically... > Does anyone else picture Absman as our very own sheriff. > The Sheriff is based on a dom top that I served for a short while in the late 90's -- he's the guy I wrote the story MILK MAN for (which started me on this long, winding road). A bodybuilder with these ridiculously oversized pecs, he was a quiet commander with very high expectations. (He also owned a Harley Road King, so figure that.) For me, he's the easiest character to write -- which is good, considering everything is about his machinations. I'm not really in this story -- though you hear me in editorial moments. I would've been more like Smitty in the Original Story.
10/15/20, 10:24 AM
He should have wear more leather ! Becoming a true full leather boy... ;)
Sexcrab
10/15/20, 9:36 AM
Okay, so I think, in general, your story is getting better and better. It may be a little late to give tips/review/"What I would like to see" about your story, since you are going to post chapter 9 today or tomorrow, but I would like to leave certain points registered, namely: **About your story:** Don't care so much about the comments above. Personally, I think many of the comments above have absolutely nothing to do with what you are trying to develop, but as much as some may have seemed rude, they are just fans of your work (myself included), so try to filter out criticism as much as possible . But anyway, I'm going to be a little bit hypocritical and give my opinion on some points. First, you should consider writing larger texts. I know that you (like me) do not have English as your native language, but now you need to coordinate the point of view of three characters (and soon there will be four, if you keep the same text format). In addition, I think you would gain more details about the events. It's been working well so far, but soon there will be an interaction between father and sons as slaves of the same man, for example, or their relationship with possible new characters, that is, your story is growing in possibilities, a sign that is being well written. **Tips:** You expanded Michael's story and pointed out the personality differences with your father Bob nicely. I also particularly like to see Bob as Dan's favorite. I would love to see Bob Summers as his officer and his children as Dan's concubines. Incest is not my thing, but it might not be unbearable. I would like to see Dan helping Bob's business (did you mention that Bob's company is in financial trouble?), Leaving the job he hates to work as an assistant and as a bonus, fucks his hot boss's ass every day at work. As for Michael, it might be interesting to see him trying to resist Dan in another way. Since Michael is a guy from the gym, I thought about getting him addicted to Dan's scent, just like Bob is addicted to his dick. Other ideas for the next chapters include: Dan giving Bob a dildo shaped like his dick; Dan convinces Bob to test his children to see if they are "really alphas"; Dan makes an argument to be alone with Michael and speed up his submission; Dan deploys hypnotic triggers to control Bob and Michael whenever he wants, for erase your memory when needed; Michael showing his body to the gay public on the internet. So many ideas, I'll put more as soon as possible. PS: When Dan is going to make Bob beg to kiss him, how did he swear he would?
Anonymous
10/15/20, 7:27 AM
A short but great start, loved the imagery.
Sexcrab
10/15/20, 5:29 AM
I found the "ending" ... too fast. It was almost impossible to appreciate the experience. But the content itself is great and gave me an interesting idea: What if Mind Wrangler "convinced" Striker to be his partner in a tag fight (in pairs)? You can explore many other possibilities.