Recent Comments

10/14/20, 6:13 PM
I enjoyed this story. I loved the medley of mind controlling sandwiched in the main story. Would be nice to see more of this kind of writing :)
Nutiper
10/14/20, 5:47 PM
Not my kink but this was *very* well-written and I absolutely enjoyed the thoroughness and the density of the world-building. Fantastic, immersive stuff. Even in rare moments when it got a little info-dump-y, the way it sank me into the world really kept my attention just from sheer interest. Oh, and I wanted to give kudos for how the worldbuilding aspects did *lots* of great work with set-up and foreshadowing of events to come. (For example, the way that the virus jumps from being a literal virus to a "computer" virus is fantastically foreshadowed with how damn thoroughly the technology has been embedded into their brains. Pretty much, the moment that Jacob mentioned sharing a "program", I had an instinct that things were about to go south for Robin, entirely because of how well you'd foreshadowed it.)
10/14/20, 4:05 PM
interesting. the more physical aspect of the abduction wasn't a turn off for me, but i'm usually more interested in the induction process and how a will slowly folds. can't wait to see how Henry is converted if we are going to be using various methods. thank you for the fun read.
Moby
10/14/20, 3:17 PM
@Transformheave Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! And thank you for the critique~ I'm always happy to receive criticism of my stories
caca509a
10/14/20, 3:00 PM
oh yeeeeeees !!! awesome sequel... cant wait for more
10/14/20, 1:39 PM
love this!
10/14/20, 12:17 PM
Since I'm neither British nor American I can't really say anything about how the characters sound, it felt a little bit forced sometimes though. However, that might just be a personal thing ;) . I loved the crazy week stories and this one is a nice addition! It's nice to see some background to the changes. To me the introduction of people calling themselves "boi" seemed a bit abrupt though and startled me a little bit. And on a more personal note, it would've been nice to dive into Matt's transformation, that part felt a little short for some reason. However, hot story, definitely saving it for a few extra reads!
10/14/20, 11:35 AM
cool story. strong and meaningful plot that keeps your interest.
10/14/20, 9:57 AM
Would be so hot to be bred into a hairy man.
Pussyhound
10/14/20, 9:14 AM
man, this dragged on and on and on. the first part was extremely poorly written. I was hoping somehow Batman would get caught up in the intrigue and end up getting his Speedo like briefs muscled ass captured and fucked like the stud bitch superhero bottom bitch whore he was born to be.