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10/14/20, 9:57 AM
Would be so hot to be bred into a hairy man.
Pussyhound
10/14/20, 9:14 AM
man, this dragged on and on and on. the first part was extremely poorly written. I was hoping somehow Batman would get caught up in the intrigue and end up getting his Speedo like briefs muscled ass captured and fucked like the stud bitch superhero bottom bitch whore he was born to be.
10/14/20, 9:14 AM
I love a good oblivious boy. well written!
Oct 11, 2020
Boi4Bears
10/14/20, 6:44 AM
i wish the dudes around the twinkifying guys in your stories were/became full on rough husky musclebear blokes, so as to have more contrast with the twinks, but still you do some damn fine slow faggification. one guy getting a "daddystrap" to go with another's twinkstrap really would be fabulous.
10/14/20, 4:45 AM
please continue this
Moby
10/14/20, 4:40 AM
@Hypnothrill Mostly cause I like the setting of an isloated british school. Plus, for the example you gave, I'm personaly not a fan of Military Schools as a setting. I did try my hardest to make them sound british though. I do admit that writting accents is one of the weakest parts of my writting. I do hope you like my take on the idea though~ I do admit that I was going for a bit more cute regarding the costumes rather than sexy. Cause sexy costumes I find kinda boring. The main point of focus for writting was the mind control, the costumes were a more Halloweeny version of the whole walking around nude part of the Original
10/14/20, 4:34 AM
Always interesting to see another take on the extremely durable original material, although this one didn't do very much for me erotically, since I found the costumes more cute and silly than sexy. Also, I was very confused about the setting; your narrative voice sounds completely American, and the characters sounded American too. Why not just set it in an all-male American institution, like a military college where they would naturally have a strict dress code and appearance?
10/14/20, 3:30 AM
another hypno dream coming to night terry
10/14/20, 3:11 AM
I love this idea "turn the kinder/accepintg/just misinformed guys into domminat daddy types and the homophobic one into think cowbois?" I think making guys who kind, nice, accepting into dominant men is great.
10/14/20, 1:52 AM
And the hunt begins XD I want to see the other mind control devices/methods you have in mind for the new guys ^ ^