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caca509a
10/14/20, 3:00 PM
oh yeeeeeees !!! awesome sequel... cant wait for more
10/14/20, 1:39 PM
love this!
10/14/20, 12:17 PM
Since I'm neither British nor American I can't really say anything about how the characters sound, it felt a little bit forced sometimes though. However, that might just be a personal thing ;) . I loved the crazy week stories and this one is a nice addition! It's nice to see some background to the changes. To me the introduction of people calling themselves "boi" seemed a bit abrupt though and startled me a little bit. And on a more personal note, it would've been nice to dive into Matt's transformation, that part felt a little short for some reason. However, hot story, definitely saving it for a few extra reads!
10/14/20, 11:35 AM
cool story. strong and meaningful plot that keeps your interest.
10/14/20, 9:57 AM
Would be so hot to be bred into a hairy man.
Pussyhound
10/14/20, 9:14 AM
man, this dragged on and on and on. the first part was extremely poorly written. I was hoping somehow Batman would get caught up in the intrigue and end up getting his Speedo like briefs muscled ass captured and fucked like the stud bitch superhero bottom bitch whore he was born to be.
10/14/20, 9:14 AM
I love a good oblivious boy. well written!
Oct 11, 2020
Boi4Bears
10/14/20, 6:44 AM
i wish the dudes around the twinkifying guys in your stories were/became full on rough husky musclebear blokes, so as to have more contrast with the twinks, but still you do some damn fine slow faggification. one guy getting a "daddystrap" to go with another's twinkstrap really would be fabulous.
10/14/20, 4:45 AM
please continue this
Moby
10/14/20, 4:40 AM
@Hypnothrill Mostly cause I like the setting of an isloated british school. Plus, for the example you gave, I'm personaly not a fan of Military Schools as a setting. I did try my hardest to make them sound british though. I do admit that writting accents is one of the weakest parts of my writting. I do hope you like my take on the idea though~ I do admit that I was going for a bit more cute regarding the costumes rather than sexy. Cause sexy costumes I find kinda boring. The main point of focus for writting was the mind control, the costumes were a more Halloweeny version of the whole walking around nude part of the Original