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10/14/20, 8:38 PM
This was too dark for me, I abhor violence and drugging anyone, whether in real life or media. The protagonist is so obsessive and calculated, he comes off not as a dominant, but as a sadistic control freak. While admit I love hypnosis, submission, and the dynamic of the two mixed, I personally draw the line at personality destruction and involuntary lobotomy. To me, the best servant is one who is willing, genuinely happy to serve, and who remains themselves. This is the plot to a horror film.
10/14/20, 8:17 PM
i loved this story since the first time that i read and until now nothing has changed lol a classic!
10/14/20, 8:10 PM
Hot and I really like your writing style! I hope to see more jps related stories in the future!
10/14/20, 8:07 PM
Honestly, I read stories on this site who are a lot more gruesome, like a vampire one with explicit deaths and a conversion therapy for straight peoples in a dystopia. I like this story, kind of hot, creative, but the chapters are so short, it feels like every scene is it's own chapter, and that the story goes very slowly. My slave twins felt a bit rushed, here it feel stretched.
10/14/20, 7:37 PM
Extremely hot and well written! A true classic already!
10/14/20, 6:53 PM
Sexy. Very very sexy. So, im gonna volunteer myself to assist in helping those poor unfortunate jocks who get JPS.
10/14/20, 6:48 PM
Great job 👍 continue .
10/14/20, 6:42 PM
I would love to read more of this :)
10/14/20, 6:13 PM
I enjoyed this story. I loved the medley of mind controlling sandwiched in the main story. Would be nice to see more of this kind of writing :)
Nutiper
10/14/20, 5:47 PM
Not my kink but this was *very* well-written and I absolutely enjoyed the thoroughness and the density of the world-building. Fantastic, immersive stuff. Even in rare moments when it got a little info-dump-y, the way it sank me into the world really kept my attention just from sheer interest. Oh, and I wanted to give kudos for how the worldbuilding aspects did *lots* of great work with set-up and foreshadowing of events to come. (For example, the way that the virus jumps from being a literal virus to a "computer" virus is fantastically foreshadowed with how damn thoroughly the technology has been embedded into their brains. Pretty much, the moment that Jacob mentioned sharing a "program", I had an instinct that things were about to go south for Robin, entirely because of how well you'd foreshadowed it.)