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KinkDawg
10/13/20, 7:25 PM
I think the difference here is the destructive and irrevocable nature of the change. It's usually up to the reader to find the "Loopholes" for escape or contentment or redemption where this is solid and can only end one way. Also, this wasn't a volunteer but a kid undeserving of his fate. I guess we find it more palatable when they're arrogant or bullies. I think I side with Martin on this one but, as he says, though not my cup of tea, it does work for others. Another reason I didn't rate it. I wont leave negative ratings just because it's not my preferred story. That being said; There's nothing wrong with the writing style but more of a background of the characters, their motivations and their end goals would make this more captivating and maybe persuade me that this is more than a random sybaritic act. Still time for redemption if you add a second chapter (hint). ****
Art
10/13/20, 6:35 PM
I liked the idea but not the violence or the idea that the hero may not ever again be himself. Much better to retain his identity but have no control. I found the writing kind of tedious. Perhaps English is not his/her native language. I do want more chapters.
10/13/20, 4:41 PM
I hope to see part 2
10/13/20, 4:22 PM
read it only once and I love it. It's actually a great story.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
10/13/20, 3:46 PM
I have read this story several times before posting & I have to say it is something I would really enjoy happening to me (if somebody was that interested in me). Great job & I look forward to it being continued. Perhaps with a second volunteer?
10/13/20, 2:34 PM
I love it 💙 been more realistic is something I like on this... I can't wait for the next chapter with the results of this :3 To Martin: quick question... if I write a story with some violence and also blood and death, that could be approved??? (asking because are some aspects of one of the stories I have in mind for the Halloween challenge)
Martin
10/13/20, 1:40 PM
I did approve it, didn't I? I'm fully aware that my uneasiness is at least partially hypocritical. The fact that he's kidnapped and subdued using very real violence and a drug, but especially, the fact that he's basically lobotomized, is what really disturbs me. It's a tad bit too close to reality and too violent for my taste. But again, this is just my taste, this is the comment section, which is meant for sharing opinions, and even though I'm the admin/owner, I'm entitled to have an opinion of my own, am I not? 😆
Anonymous
10/13/20, 1:35 PM
Hot story! It reminds me of the art of Troubled's Growing Pandemic.
Anonymous
10/13/20, 1:23 PM
I think I'll have to disagree with Martin in this. I actually enjoyed the story a lot and I don't see how it is different from any story on this website. All stories essentially deal with the idea of forcing people to mostly perform sexual acts against their will which in itself can be considered "horrible, violent and despicable". So what are the stories the admins don't have to struggle to publish ?
Martin
10/13/20, 12:22 PM
I want to be honest here, I struggled with the decision whether I should approve this or not. The acts described here are horrible, violent and despicable. However, same is true for many other fantasies on this site, so it would feel hypocritical to me to draw an arbitrary line here. Let's just say that this fantasy is not mine and doesn't turn me on in the slightest. But other people might feel different about it, for sure.