Recent Comments

Moby
10/14/20, 12:52 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! Yeah the lack of an explenation of what exactly caused the changes was always my biggest issue with the original. So, I thought to fix it~ Glad you enjoyed it
10/14/20, 12:50 AM
I've always been a fan of the original source material and enjoyed your version of the week of transformations. I appreciate your explanation of the Master behind the changes. Great work!
10/14/20, 12:32 AM
amazing!
10/13/20, 9:40 PM
I think all three threads can work, as for Levi, after the Locker Room, what about a Cowboy geathering? turn the kinder/accepintg/just misinformed guys into domminat daddy types and the homophobic one into think cowbois?
10/13/20, 8:24 PM
I liked it, but somehow I felt the Adam substory didn't really pay out. I was hoping that the Sheik was Adam who secretly ran away due to his sexuality and set things up to attract/dominate the protagonist.
KinkDawg
10/13/20, 7:25 PM
I think the difference here is the destructive and irrevocable nature of the change. It's usually up to the reader to find the "Loopholes" for escape or contentment or redemption where this is solid and can only end one way. Also, this wasn't a volunteer but a kid undeserving of his fate. I guess we find it more palatable when they're arrogant or bullies. I think I side with Martin on this one but, as he says, though not my cup of tea, it does work for others. Another reason I didn't rate it. I wont leave negative ratings just because it's not my preferred story. That being said; There's nothing wrong with the writing style but more of a background of the characters, their motivations and their end goals would make this more captivating and maybe persuade me that this is more than a random sybaritic act. Still time for redemption if you add a second chapter (hint). ****
Art
10/13/20, 6:35 PM
I liked the idea but not the violence or the idea that the hero may not ever again be himself. Much better to retain his identity but have no control. I found the writing kind of tedious. Perhaps English is not his/her native language. I do want more chapters.
10/13/20, 4:41 PM
I hope to see part 2
10/13/20, 4:22 PM
read it only once and I love it. It's actually a great story.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
10/13/20, 3:46 PM
I have read this story several times before posting & I have to say it is something I would really enjoy happening to me (if somebody was that interested in me). Great job & I look forward to it being continued. Perhaps with a second volunteer?