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Oct 11, 2020
Boi4Bears
10/14/20, 6:44 AM
i wish the dudes around the twinkifying guys in your stories were/became full on rough husky musclebear blokes, so as to have more contrast with the twinks, but still you do some damn fine slow faggification. one guy getting a "daddystrap" to go with another's twinkstrap really would be fabulous.
10/14/20, 4:45 AM
please continue this
Moby
10/14/20, 4:40 AM
@Hypnothrill Mostly cause I like the setting of an isloated british school. Plus, for the example you gave, I'm personaly not a fan of Military Schools as a setting. I did try my hardest to make them sound british though. I do admit that writting accents is one of the weakest parts of my writting. I do hope you like my take on the idea though~ I do admit that I was going for a bit more cute regarding the costumes rather than sexy. Cause sexy costumes I find kinda boring. The main point of focus for writting was the mind control, the costumes were a more Halloweeny version of the whole walking around nude part of the Original
10/14/20, 4:34 AM
Always interesting to see another take on the extremely durable original material, although this one didn't do very much for me erotically, since I found the costumes more cute and silly than sexy. Also, I was very confused about the setting; your narrative voice sounds completely American, and the characters sounded American too. Why not just set it in an all-male American institution, like a military college where they would naturally have a strict dress code and appearance?
10/14/20, 3:30 AM
another hypno dream coming to night terry
10/14/20, 3:11 AM
I love this idea "turn the kinder/accepintg/just misinformed guys into domminat daddy types and the homophobic one into think cowbois?" I think making guys who kind, nice, accepting into dominant men is great.
10/14/20, 1:52 AM
And the hunt begins XD I want to see the other mind control devices/methods you have in mind for the new guys ^ ^
jamiemboy
10/14/20, 1:05 AM
Really loved it! amazing story! especially the buzzcut.
Moby
10/14/20, 12:52 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! Yeah the lack of an explenation of what exactly caused the changes was always my biggest issue with the original. So, I thought to fix it~ Glad you enjoyed it
10/14/20, 12:50 AM
I've always been a fan of the original source material and enjoyed your version of the week of transformations. I appreciate your explanation of the Master behind the changes. Great work!