Recent Comments

10/14/20, 12:32 AM
amazing!
10/13/20, 9:40 PM
I think all three threads can work, as for Levi, after the Locker Room, what about a Cowboy geathering? turn the kinder/accepintg/just misinformed guys into domminat daddy types and the homophobic one into think cowbois?
10/13/20, 8:24 PM
I liked it, but somehow I felt the Adam substory didn't really pay out. I was hoping that the Sheik was Adam who secretly ran away due to his sexuality and set things up to attract/dominate the protagonist.
KinkDawg
10/13/20, 7:25 PM
I think the difference here is the destructive and irrevocable nature of the change. It's usually up to the reader to find the "Loopholes" for escape or contentment or redemption where this is solid and can only end one way. Also, this wasn't a volunteer but a kid undeserving of his fate. I guess we find it more palatable when they're arrogant or bullies. I think I side with Martin on this one but, as he says, though not my cup of tea, it does work for others. Another reason I didn't rate it. I wont leave negative ratings just because it's not my preferred story. That being said; There's nothing wrong with the writing style but more of a background of the characters, their motivations and their end goals would make this more captivating and maybe persuade me that this is more than a random sybaritic act. Still time for redemption if you add a second chapter (hint). ****
Art
10/13/20, 6:35 PM
I liked the idea but not the violence or the idea that the hero may not ever again be himself. Much better to retain his identity but have no control. I found the writing kind of tedious. Perhaps English is not his/her native language. I do want more chapters.
10/13/20, 4:41 PM
I hope to see part 2
10/13/20, 4:22 PM
read it only once and I love it. It's actually a great story.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
10/13/20, 3:46 PM
I have read this story several times before posting & I have to say it is something I would really enjoy happening to me (if somebody was that interested in me). Great job & I look forward to it being continued. Perhaps with a second volunteer?
10/13/20, 2:34 PM
I love it 💙 been more realistic is something I like on this... I can't wait for the next chapter with the results of this :3 To Martin: quick question... if I write a story with some violence and also blood and death, that could be approved??? (asking because are some aspects of one of the stories I have in mind for the Halloween challenge)
Martin
10/13/20, 1:40 PM
I did approve it, didn't I? I'm fully aware that my uneasiness is at least partially hypocritical. The fact that he's kidnapped and subdued using very real violence and a drug, but especially, the fact that he's basically lobotomized, is what really disturbs me. It's a tad bit too close to reality and too violent for my taste. But again, this is just my taste, this is the comment section, which is meant for sharing opinions, and even though I'm the admin/owner, I'm entitled to have an opinion of my own, am I not? 😆